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Madame Chipmunk
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0 posted 2002-05-10 12:13 PM


Its Time


I had originally written this for my 3000 post, which I thought would be about a month ago, and then the side effects of the radiation treatments hit me real hard, so I was barely able to use my computer at all.When I read this poem again...I realized how much more appropriate it is now than it would have been before I went through the tough part of the radiation, so maybe its good that I had to wait until now to post it.
    

When nightmares haunt your sleep
and through your waking moments, seep
and the worlds' a daunting place
its time to show your grace

when your view turns upside down
and you're standing on your crown
and your life is fraught with fright
its time to gather your wits and fight

when your life is burdened with pain
and the sun is hidden by clouds and rain
and everything is tinged with sad
its time to bury the spirits of bad

its time to let your warrior out
its time for your inner self to shout
its time to be strong and survive
its time for your hope to revive
its time
its time
its time




Lyra

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[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (05-10-2002 12:50 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-05-10 12:36 PM


Congratulations on your 3,000th post Lyra, but more importantly congratulations on being a real warrior, and a fighter.  I think this poem is so indicative of your inner tenacity and spirit, which I respect immensely. Great poem from a great lady!

We should spend less time on worrying when our life is going to end and more on when it's going to start!

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2 posted 2002-05-10 12:41 PM


i read this like i would a rap song..congrats on the 3000 and thanks for sharing this positive self-affirming message..

when the going gets tough, the tough gets going..

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3 posted 2002-05-10 07:24 AM



There IS a cadence of hope and life about this piece and it IS timely that you post it as you go through some adversity...with a spirit like yours that is ever shining, it tells the rest of us...wake up folks! You ain't seen nuttin', yet!

Hugs to you, and Congratulations on your 3000th post!

Saunni
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4 posted 2002-05-10 07:28 AM


Such a beautiful write! So full of life! Congrats on 3000th.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

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5 posted 2002-05-10 08:15 AM




BRAVO!!! OH LYRA, THANK YOU FOR BEING YOu, THIS IS A FABULOUS 3000TH POST, I LOVE IT, YAY!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSS) You are a true warrior and I am so proud of you, for I know He will always bless you and despite all the tears we may cry, you will find all the strength and peace your heart deserves! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Nan
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6 posted 2002-05-10 08:16 AM


There's NO time like NOW
This is beautifully done, Lyra
Congrats on your milestone...

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7 posted 2002-05-10 08:59 AM


CONGRATULATIONS LYRA ON YOUR 3000th POST!
Here's to many many thousands more!
~Luv and Hugs to you dear poetess~

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8 posted 2002-05-10 09:26 AM


Congradulations on your 3000th post, Lyra. And, I am glad you are a fighter.
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9 posted 2002-05-10 09:31 AM


Lyra,
Congratulations on the write and the fight.
I'm giving odds on you. Love Sy

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10 posted 2002-05-10 05:08 PM


its time to let your warrior out
its time for your inner self to shout
its time to be strong and survive
its time for your hope to revive''

I found so much peace in this...very nice Lyra.....HUGSSSSS....and Peace....


Lauren~

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Could I have been anyone other than me
True poems rest between the words
Give hope a chance to float, it will

Kethry
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11 posted 2002-05-10 05:15 PM


Warriorwoman,
It's time and timely.
Fight on
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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12 posted 2002-05-10 05:23 PM


God bless.
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13 posted 2002-05-10 06:15 PM


Lyra darling girl OH MY this is so amazing, a simply stunning example of your craft, I think it’s beautiful, the flow simply exquisite and the content is utterly utterly fabulous.

This affirmation of your spirit this wonderful and appropriate gift from you to PIP’s is utterly outstanding.

Congratulations
on 3 0 0 0
well done Lyra


utterly utterly wonderful I love it my darling friend as always it’s beautiful work


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Bill Charles
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14 posted 2002-05-10 07:20 PM


Madame - congratulations on 3000. I love your work, it is unique...

BC

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15 posted 2002-05-10 07:25 PM


Congrats Lyra on 3000!!!
        Wonderful words of strength!!
                 hugs, Chris

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16 posted 2002-05-10 07:28 PM


You are amazing...Congratulations on 3000!
Madame Chipmunk
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17 posted 2002-05-10 09:35 PM


Thanks so much for your wonderful reply, Sharon...I never thought of myself as a warrior before until I had to go through this horrible bout with the radiation treatments.  Now I know that I know how to fight.
~ fighting hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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18 posted 2002-05-10 09:53 PM


thanks faterider...I never thought of myself as a rap composer before.
I'll keep that in mind for when I grow up.
~hugs from a rap composer

Lyra

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19 posted 2002-05-10 09:54 PM


Lyra~
Dear lady ... I'm so glad you found the fortitude of the ~Warrior~ in you ...~

'its time to let your warrior out
its time for your inner self to shout
its time to be strong and survive
its time for your hope to revive
its time
its time
its time'


Thank you ... I have a friend facing the old C-Battle ... he is scheduled for more surgery next week ... I've sent him this mantra of your strength to wear as his own~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Madame Chipmunk
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20 posted 2002-05-10 09:55 PM


Thanks Karilea...for the reply, as well as the vote of confidence.  I finally got my hair cut short again and colored it back to it's natural color, now I feel like myself again and now I look just like my photo again.
~sunshiny hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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21 posted 2002-05-10 09:57 PM


Thanks so much, Saunni...for the reply and the congrats...
~thank you hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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22 posted 2002-05-10 09:58 PM


Thanks so much for your reply, Noah...you are very welcome and thanks for that absolutely wonderful compliment, but I really don't know how to be anyone else but me...
~ lots of hugs from me

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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23 posted 2002-05-10 10:00 PM


Thanks so much for your reply, Nan...
I actually never thought I would get to this milestone...never thought I would get back to posting here again...
but, here I am...at least for now!
~smiling at ya hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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24 posted 2002-05-10 10:03 PM


Thanks so much for your reply, Nancy...
As I said before, I really didn't think I would ever get back here again, but I hope that now that I am back here, I will be able to stay for a while...even though it has been rather slow going for me as late.
~heartfelt hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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25 posted 2002-05-10 10:06 PM


Thanks so much for your reply, Sue...
I guess I have had to become a warrior lately.
~fighting hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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26 posted 2002-05-10 10:08 PM


Thanks so much, Sy...but its not over yet...I still haven't had the CT scan, but I do feel in my heart that the tumor is all gone.  Of course, it might have spread somewhere else...but I feel so good that I can't imagine that it did.
~big thank you hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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27 posted 2002-05-10 10:10 PM


Thanks so much Lauren...I am glad that this makes you feel peace.  It gives me peace of mind right now, but I'm still nervous that some of it could have been left there and it might spread...I will have a CT scan in a couple of weeks to find out.
peaceful hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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28 posted 2002-05-10 10:12 PM


Thanks so much for your reply, Keth...I intend to keep fighting this...and fighting and fighting until I win the war.
~fighting hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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29 posted 2002-05-10 10:13 PM


Thanks so much, Bernie...from a chipmunk to a squirrel...
~rodent hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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30 posted 2002-05-10 10:15 PM


Thanks so much, Marsha for your totally uplifting reply.
~loving hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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31 posted 2002-05-10 10:16 PM


Thanks so much for your reply, Bill and for that lovely compliment, you are making my head swell...
~bigheaded conceited hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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32 posted 2002-05-10 10:18 PM


Thanks so much for your reply and your congrats, Chris...I never really thought I would get here.
~celebretory hugs

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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33 posted 2002-05-10 10:21 PM


Thanks for those absolutely WONDERFUL words, Duncan...
~amazing hugs ~

Lyra

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Madame Chipmunk
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34 posted 2002-05-10 10:26 PM


Thanks you so much, Marge...I am unbelievably complimented that you sent my poem to your friend....
I hope that it helps him to find some strength and that it helps him to get well.
In the meantime, I will offer my prayers for him to help him get through this horrible time.
~hugs of support

Lyra

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