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Rose Scented Dreams
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Rose Scented Dreams |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 Play Blue Eyes by Bruce deBoer ~*~ Rose Scented Dreams ~*~The scent of a rose reminds me of my dreams, A dream I dream almost every night it seems. You hands me a rose, gives me a big smile, makes me feel I'm a sensuous woman a while. My love, I’ve seen you so often in my mind, you and I, our bodies and our hearts entwined. So in tune, we have no need for words, our only music, summer’s sweet songbirds. We are dancing under a star-studded sky so much in love are you and I. Is this dream of love ever to come true? or will I spend my life just dreaming of you? I've felt your skin within my dreams, called your name in silent screams. I search the dark halls of my imagination, just for a small light of confirmation. I've searched for you through times untold, through songs unsung, and days of old. Your face I’ve seen over and over in my mind, but never viewed through these blue eyes of mine. I’ve held your hands, and kissed your lips, Felt your arms around me resting on my hips. I looked into your eyes and seen your soul, you’re the one to make me more whole. I've heard the beating of your heart so close to mine yet fate keeps us apart. Each night I lay and wait for your return I've felt your fire, the warmth, the burn. My soul mate, tell me are you even near? Shall I wait for you a month, or even a year? A lifetime still may come inbetween, so forever I'll live in my rose scented dream. ~*~ We should spend less time on worrying when our life is going to end and more on when it's going to start! [This message has been edited by Mysteria (05-09-2002 11:50 PM).] |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Mysteria, I absolutely loved this poem! ~Laura~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, you always write the most gorgeous poems with dreamy nature atmosphers, this too had me thinking of my love! (sigh) May you always be mesmerized by rose dreams and may your true love always be the rose of your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I smile at this, because those roses are getting closer.  |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Sharon This was love and romance at its very best and who better than to write of such beauty. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The scent of a rose.. is nearly as lovely as its touch... and these words are equally as lovely, Mysteria's one...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, Gosh I didn't kow you carred. LOL Beautiful poem. Sy |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
How beautiful! The scent of your poetry fills my morning Gosh, you do brighten my day Liz |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so beautiful. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A beautiful 'dream'!! You chose just the right graphic (as you always do) to set off your poem.  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well thank you all for your comments but sigh...it is just a dream, Sy  That picture just kind of spoke to me it did. I forgot to mention the artist is Linda Bergkvist (my favorite computer graphic artist). |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sharon, I love your rose scented dream and with you I share your desire for it to come true in your life. You are certainly deserving. Very well written poem and thanks for sharing. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Classic!and beautiful. paladin |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
Thank you dear it is so nice My love, I've seen you so often in my mind. You and I, Our bodies and our hearts entwined. So in tune, We need no words. We needs no words I Love You Muys, We need no words |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah, but dreams are just wishes in hibernation aren't they? Summer is coming and everyone comes out of the woodwork for a few months, so there's still hope for me Thank you for sharing my dream. We should spend less time worrying about when our life is going to end and more on when it's going to start! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You dear lady are a garden of many exquisite things! I hope you are doing great..as I'm still hanging in there claws and all. Enjoyed this beauty. Sincerely, Reg |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Remind me to tuck a petal under my pillow, that I might write one as lovely some one day... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sharon....simply beautiful. ~Hugs~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I've felt your skin within my dreams, called your name in silent screams. this is gorgeous, Sharon ~dreamy hugsLyra |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Mysteria...Gorgeous poem and a gorgeous picture to match. Hope you find your soulmate. ***Ivy Rose |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Regina ~ Send a picture of the garden when done will you? By the way, I thought she kind of looked like you a bit? Sunshine ~ a petal? That would be like me dropping my little oyster into your big ocean of neverending poems,but you are sweet! Nancy ~ coming from the Queen of romance I thank you. Lyra ~ See? I do remember what it was like! Ivy Rose ~ thank you and your name are two of my favorite things, ivy and roses We should spend less time worrying about when our life is going to end and more on when it's going to start! |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
beautiful writing Mysteria. You tantalize the senses with the beautiful words. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
sigheyes ~ What a nice name, and thank you for reading this one. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sharon, a keeper of a rose and dream this certainly is....Not an unfamiliar dream... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
absolutely stunning write Sharon. dreams are sooo much. *s* Like a red brick, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Each line kept getting better and better...a very soft and touching poem...James |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Gee just when I think I am writig bunk, you all seem to like it, and I throw more of these in the garbage than I care to tell you about. Thank you all so much. We should spend less time worrying about when our life is going to end and more on when it's going to start! |
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