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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx
0 posted 2002-05-09 09:47 PM

Your beauty sparkles with dynamic gems
In which the glow you generate
Warms the soul
In such intensity that you gravitate me
On a plain of my very own

Admiring you so much
I become mesmerized
In the wisdom you speak
In the strengths of your will
That will survive in me forever

So what face should I put on you
That I can bless my existence

A teacher
Mentor
Leader
Philosopher
Or maybe one with all the power

To bless this sinner
In the peace that is needed
To cuddle his existence
In the beauty given him
With thoughts making
Words cry in music
Of understanding

Email me at [email protected]
D.Lester Young (03/12/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
1 posted 2002-05-09 10:31 PM

Very nice poetry.  I was expecting the answer to be mother.  Joyce
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