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Could Have Been
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Could Have Been |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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~Could Have Been~ for a very special friend. She'd do anything to be the sparkle once again in his eye She'd do anything, nothing would she not compromise She's been wishing on the stars that shine so bright For answers to questions that haunt her on this night How she'd heal if he would just begin to see That she needs to be healed in his arms to feel free Everything happens for a reason, some that she will never understand Still she knows the heart of a woman shatters at times like crystal sand If she leaves she fears he will not follow As the depths of the ocean start to become shallow What could be worse than leaving him behind In her tears of solitude, it's lonliness she finds Once upon a year long ago that went by She slowly closed her eyes Watching herself as she softly to him gave in She now sees all the things that could have been A darkness now steals the light Her mind no longer healed by the night All she ever wanted was for their love to survive A day in which their love will begin new life Once upon a time long gone by She slowly closed her eyes Watching herself as she softly to him gave in She nows sees all the things that could have been "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do" [This message has been edited by Aimster (05-09-2002 07:23 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Amy, this is so sadly beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to her and other women who yearn for their loves and I pray that they all will find what their heart desires and have that gleam forever shine in their eyes with joy! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amy this is one incredible write! Extremely well done! I love it....a real keeper. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sis of my heart the sadness and the sorrow that is in this is writte as only you can do. But through it all I see some hope. You know I utterly utterly love your writing, the flow the rhythm, the style, the construction but most of all I love it because it embodies your spirit. No one can write as well as you do f hearts pain   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  [/center]To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (05-09-2002 08:03 PM).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Well Miss Amy, It's so great to read after so long and I really enjoyed this heartfelt write. Well Done honey  I'm parking it into my library. Maree |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Amy...I love it. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very beautiful writing, Amy hugs M |
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