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When Stars Collide
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When Stars Collide |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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The feel of breathe upon a neck as shudders of joy flow beneath skin when moments alone are but a speck of sand ‘tween toes curling and thin Love’s sighs mold feel of covered ears as traces of the line contours taking from in lightest of fears as love becomes that which endures Two stars soar light of heaven’s night in quest of union to be one sun Guided only by beat of slight as hearts race wild on cosmos run. A bond is born in flash of fire as star born bodies do collide Explosions fuel hunger’s desire from souls when joining tumbling flied. Birth of one light in darkened night as stars are one in two star's flight [This message has been edited by Magnus (05-09-2002 06:55 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this one Barry... Leaves one with lots to ponder.... ~hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Magnus - you're a real romantic!!! Enjoyed this soft, light piece very much! Corinne |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry Your words continually sweep me off my feet and leave me feeling so at peace. You have an amazing ability to capture the reader from start to finish. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Nancy...sometimes my own poems leave me a lot to ponder as well....This was just some poetic rambling...not really much to it all... Struggling right now... Though pen is wet and well is full the mind is slow and feels the pull of heavens and the stars witin where all of poetry does begin. Hugs Nance... Barry Corinne, Yep...that's me...a hopeless and hapless romantic...thank you... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, I just love the wonderful words of love you always write! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue....I have to....otherwise, how can I ever sweep the carpet under your computer?? Thanx dear one.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah...thank you my young friend...take care... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Greetings, I have seen this beautiful glow... from heart to pen... My challenge..."Star Search"...Let's go! |
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Melodie Morningstarr Junior Member
since 2002-05-09
Posts 16Toronto, ON, Canada |
How beautiful and the flow is like silk. You've impressed this hopeless romantic! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Good evening Melodie....nice meeting you here at PiP....sit back and enjoy the eve. and I will grace your eyes with more as the days go by...I too am a hopeless romantic... THANK YOU MUCH!!!!! |
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