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Toerag
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0 posted 2002-05-09 12:30 PM


Balladeer's new girlfriend
She's really very lovable
Called a one nine hundred line
A mail bought inflatable.

She's adorable
Affordable
Portable
And Storable!

Balladeer's knew girlfriend
I think her name is Ruth
Her mouth is quite desirable
She hasn't got a tooth
She's perfect for the bathtub
(She's also waterproof)!

She's wonderful
Hugable
Lovable
But combustable!

She's the almost perfect girlfriend
Only lacking class
If Balladeer should hug too hard
She tends to pass some gas!

[This message has been edited by Toerag (05-09-2002 12:43 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
suthern
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1 posted 2002-05-09 01:41 PM


Now hold up there jes' a sec! LOL Couldn't you have chosen another name for his gal? LOL Are you trying (not so subtly *G*) to give him your biggest trial and tribulation? LOL Sorry 'bout that, sweets... but you're stuck with me! LOL

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2 posted 2002-05-09 01:48 PM


By the way... I enjoyed this immensely... and I'm enjoying the miracle of you being around two days in a row more than I know how to say!!! *S*

Even as I ponder what Freudian slip prompted you giving Bal's inflatable gal pal MY name! LOL Good thing I think you're perfect, right? LOL

[This message has been edited by suthern (05-09-2002 01:49 PM).]

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3 posted 2002-05-09 02:04 PM


Popped in to congratulate the 'deer. Sounds like she's a real doll!
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4 posted 2002-05-09 03:26 PM


She's the almost perfect girlfriend
Only lacking class

Good selection, Michael...class is highly overrated!

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5 posted 2002-05-09 04:21 PM


Hey, what can I say? It wasn't a very GoodYear!!

Toe, I hope you realize that you are one deranged individual

I must be, too...I liked this one!

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6 posted 2002-05-09 04:39 PM


Balladear One... Please remind him that I'm only visiting Florida and you'll send me back as quickly as possible... he's not getting rid of me! LOL
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7 posted 2002-05-09 04:51 PM


rofg............oh my...........oh my..........rofg...........oh my.......speechless..........rofg

oh gosh I miss playing like this...whew...been working too hard I guess

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8 posted 2002-05-09 06:12 PM


Ah, suthern girl, do you really think after being with me you're gonna have any desire to see Toe again? Not a chance! One doesn't go from Gone With the Wind to Big Bag of Wind - ecstacy to epilepsy - a thoroughbred to the old gray mare. When you are here you will feel a shroud being lifted from your soul and you will thank me for freeing you from the curse of having been bewitched by a toad. You will return knowing you are a better woman than when you arrived. The Toes of the world shall disappear and you will seek perfection in life, knowing finally that it does exist. In other words, you'll give Toe the boot!
Corinne
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9 posted 2002-05-09 07:22 PM


Oh, Toe!

Corinne

Titia Geertman
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10 posted 2002-05-09 07:57 PM



Mmmm I think she'll suit Deer perfectly

Now I'll pop over to see what 'ol'Deer's got to say about this.

Love it Deerly Toe

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

LRbaba
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11 posted 2002-05-09 08:06 PM


great sales pitch, toe
how much and when
can i expect shipmnet?

(is the informercial next?)

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12 posted 2002-05-09 08:11 PM




(giggles in delight) Looks like the ("Attack Of The "Toes") fever is going around very quickly! LOL! Looks like Balladeer is not wasting any time to plot his move, I can't wait to see what happens, hehehehehe, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Toerag, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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13 posted 2002-05-09 08:17 PM


For those of you who want the REAL story, and don't mind a trip to Adult, you can find it here.....
/main/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayprivate&number=5&topic=000222

SmartChick
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14 posted 2002-05-09 09:05 PM


Well now, I wonder what Balladeer has to say about this. Think I will go look.
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15 posted 2002-05-09 09:09 PM


I'm glad to see you airing your opinions. (that pun needs life-support)
Nan
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16 posted 2002-05-09 09:09 PM


This is just plain Sue, blown out of proportion here...
Nan
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Honeybee
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18 posted 2002-05-09 09:12 PM



You mean that 'Deer has another besides me?!!!

LOL I'm luvin' this Toe!

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Madame Chipmunk
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19 posted 2002-05-10 12:59 PM


ROFL

Another good show
from the invincible Mr.Toe



I hope Balladeer doesn't pull her plug by accident..
it could lead to a deflating incident
but this babe doesn't give a care
afterall...she's full of hot air


Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks


[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (05-10-2002 01:03 AM).]

Toerag
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20 posted 2002-05-10 07:25 AM


Thank all so much for the nice words....Yassee how Balladeer treats me? Just cuz I let his "secret love" out of the closet, (actully, I pulled her plug and she flew out of the closet).....
suthern
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21 posted 2002-05-10 09:11 AM


Deer Bal, the time is coming soon
When we'll meet face to face
You'll learn what Toe has suffered through
With dignity and grace...
I'm guessing an apology
Will spring forth rather quickly
When you see what he's put up with
You'll be feeling rather sickly!
You'll shake your head and marvel
That a man could be so brave...
You'll be Toe's greatest promoter -
Of his merits you will rave!
And then you'll exhale gratitude
As I crawl on the plane
That Toe's the one I so adore...
I'd drive you quite insane!
"The ole bag's gone" you'll softly sigh
"That Toe, he is the man!
Having that thing as my shadow's
More than I could stand!"
But you won't be left alone
As I follow my heart
If you do not squeeze too hard,
You'll have my counterpart! *G*

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22 posted 2002-05-11 09:28 PM


HA HA HA HA HA!

Toerag! You must be the forum's motley fool!  This is hillarious!  Can you give me that 1-900 number, so I can buy one for my husband!  Of course, I'd want to give him your poem, too, if that's acceptable!  

HA HA HA HA HA!

Thank you for that!

~Sydney McLean

Justbleu
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23 posted 2002-05-11 11:52 PM


I couldn't resist reading this Toe...the title sucked me in!!!!!  If 'Deer wasn't around what would you write about????  Hilarious!!!!!!!

Inflatable Babe aka Bal's cheap date!!!!   
'Deer I thought you were a classy guy????

Toe and 'Deer Thanks for the laughs.....

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Balladeer
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24 posted 2002-05-12 12:10 PM


Hey! I AM classy! That was imported rubber!
Justbleu
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25 posted 2002-05-12 12:20 PM


Laughs and giggles......

From Taiwan???


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

[This message has been edited by Justbleu (05-12-2002 12:22 AM).]

Duncan
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26 posted 2002-05-12 12:33 PM


Does she have a sister?
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