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What Are You Doing Tonight?
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What Are You Doing Tonight? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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What Are You Doing Tonight? Wings of elation and wonder take flight In breezes that lift me to unmeasured height The sky’s filled with glittering stars of delight Tell me, what are you doing tonight? I’ve never treasured a love such as this I’ve yet to savor the taste of your kiss This is a feeling I cannot dismiss Tell me, what is your notion of bliss? I was a dreamer of dreams from the start I am a poet of words from the heart Somehow my words at the moment seem right Tell me, what are you doing tonight? Elizabeth Santos |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I've heard the same words, but never so grandly said!!! Love this! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I do believe that words we hear in our dreams can always be right and belong in reality and I know all your dreams will come true if you never ake the words for granted! (kiss on cheek) May you have many lovely nights and days with love and laughter in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You can even think trochaicly, dear lady.. You amaze me..  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Nothing that I can think of. A wonderful and lovely write. Love Sy |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
In my dreams to bring the night I find the words of fancy's flight closer to thee in harmony closer to thee, in poetry |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz..you write the question in such a way that I want to answer beautiful poet tonight I am going to read more of you |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Passing shadows, Could it be that you've used them? LOL next time recite a verse along with it! Thank you! Noah, Thank you dear. Say, What are you doing tonight? Nan, Trocha-what? It is you who amazes me. Thank you, Teach. Sy, No need for words, Just that you read is enough Elan, How beautiful! Thank you! Martie, You are so sweet. You warm my heart Hugs Liz |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Only one way to find out...one of my favorites....James |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I was a dreamer of dreams from the start I am a poet of words from the heart Somehow my words at the moment seem right Tell me, what are you doing tonight? I wish I was doing anything close to feeling as good as this poem felt. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Tonight, tonight...what shall I do? I'll sit and read sweet words from you. I'll see the letters on the screen Decipher what they truly mean Then hear the words come from your mouth As they had done up in Falmouth And see the look upon your face As words you penned with style and grace And I'll imagine one time more To hear you knocking at my door. Tonight, tonight....what shall I do? The night belongs to me and you. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
James, THank you! Duncan, Maybe you should ask the question Thanks for your nice comment Balladeer You are a man who has launched many ships You have been one of my favorite pips Turn away from the shore line and turn toward my lips Tell me, what are you doing tonight? Thanks for the poem Liz |
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