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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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Isn't it lovely how we've become friends The gap quietly closing a new relationship begins Both now adults children of our own Making new lives in our own homes My dearest sister I love you so Being much older I've watched you grow From a tiny baby to an annoying kid Into adulthood I watched you open that lid You are a wonderful person you're heart does shine I'm so proud of you all the time So my sister quietly closing in I'm glad we're also now great friends Love is the life of the soul... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tracy darling girl this is outstanding writing, as always you excel at whatever you write. Fabulous writing and this is so descriptive so vivid in its image of the joys and delights of sisters Utterly utterly wonderful writing YOU darling girl never disappoint. Wonderful absolutely perfect poetry, YOU do know I utterly utterly love it don’t you? Of course you do    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this brought a tear to my eye reading this, this is soooooooo beautiful and I know that your sister will cry reading this, always bring so blessed to have such a sweet sister like you as you are a wonderful friend to us all! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tracie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is very lovely Tracie! Sounds so much like my younger sister Nightshade and myself... the older we grow the closer we become. Wonderful write and I am sure she will love it. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
tracie66 A lovely write, enjoyed |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
You did send this, yes? She should not go a day without and a lovely frame to grace... |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
Dear Tracy It is a lovely poem I am jealous, my only sister she don't recognice me. I am happy for you. Much love Muys |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
tracie~ this was a beautiful poem about sisters being some of our best friends...i have two sisters myself, one lives in cali and i don't speak to her much for various reasons, but my baby sister lives near me and she is my dearest friend...it's such a special bond once we get older and they aren't annoying anymore lol. great write! take care amy "you can't stop |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I know how you feel..my sis and i love looking back at the good ole days too..and i dont know what i would do without her...hugs ~Victoria |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
tracie - Your sister will surely treasure this. As my sister Enchantress said, we have become closer over the years....oh, my tracie..you have made me drift off into a moment of very pleasant memories. Thankyou for this lovely piece. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hi everyone~ Thank you so much for your lovely replies, it was my sister's birthday on the 6th of May and I wrote this for her, she loved it. Thanks once again for your comments, I appreciate all of them I'm sorry I can't reply to you all individually ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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