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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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Some words are silent feathers. Bristling pillow cool. Others are hard quartz stones. Elements of time. Some words are glassy marbles: tick-together play. Others are fragment bones. Spit your teeth outside. Sun heat pushing through the floor. Gemming water glass. All are moved by rain and wind. All erode with time. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I love the whole thing, but the title of this.....makes the 'words' of the poem mean so much more........nice write |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Your writing intrigues me..I have to study it sometimes... but I like being made to think. *s M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dang.... Karilea |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You're good! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Every word has its antonym or contradiction, but every word also has a meaning and a story to tell and that is the sheer magic of poetry! (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
SOOOO Good!! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you. |
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