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Open Poetry #20

Upon A Hill

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2002-05-08 03:02 PM

dreams are constant frailties
in the mass confusion
of breathing in the days
lost seconds you want to grasp,
the thoughts of rythem
that spin upon your eyes
and fall deeply between
your lips, half hearted
laughter gains control
of the wisdom in the concrete
steping lightly away from
next years tragedies,
only once in a sigh,
could you find grace
crying to the sun whispering
your name, time to go home.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-06-03 06:48 AM

Michael, this tender bit somehow
slipped by everyone...

ULookSoPrecious
Junior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 16
NC, U.S.A.

2 posted 2002-06-03 07:36 AM

I like this alot. Especially:

"Dreams are constant frailties"

Very nice.

"Nobody, not even the rain, has such small hands." -ee cummings

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-06-03 08:32 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, I'm so happy Karilea found this and returned this to the top or I would have missed this forever, yes, I think many of us can relate to the thoughts of dreams and think they are lovely, but we also realize that it is time to go home too! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-06-03 08:39 PM

could you find grace
crying to the sun whispering
your name, time to go home.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Michael, this is exquisite!
~hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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