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Open Poetry #20

Before the Examination Hall (20 or less)

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2002-05-08 02:07 PM

a teddy in one hand,
a loaded pencil case in the other,

I step cautiously
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S
I
D
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to
...slay essential evil

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-05-08 06:47 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, I can't believe this got down to Page 3 without a reply, you deserve a huge (((bump))) back up to the top, YAY!!! (sigh) I love this, to me the teddy bear represents your love and innocence of your heart and the pencil is your weapon of words to make poetic justice and your courage! (smiles) This is excellent, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Heng, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-05-08 06:53 PM

Excellent heng!
I love these 20 or less ones
and this one is terrific!
Love the presentation as well.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

3 posted 2002-05-12 11:27 AM

Wow!!!! This one is great!!!

An essential evil... indeed!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

DestinysCharm
Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 90

4 posted 2002-05-14 03:55 PM

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