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Unraveling Memories (20 or less)
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Unraveling Memories (20 or less) |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Amazing what you hang on too glimpses of life photographs, black & white, color, canvas spools of string unraveling memories still ~~~~~~~~~~ I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Lauren Hi there, this is superb writing skill, the way this flows is simply amazing, YOU are a wonderful writer, because this is seriously good writing. How well you write this   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Lauren! You know I love this! ~Hugs~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Lauren, this is so very beautiful, sweet friend, your heart always unravels such beauty within to share with us all! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ This is simply lovely~ And right now (in my moving frenzy) this line applies soooooooooooo well to me - 'Amazing what you hang on too' Packed the memories one by one Thought that I would NEVER get done~ But the part that was REALLY tough Was finding room for the 'other stuff'~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Amazing for me also, as i did not understood its real deep theme.  Showing ur high power of thinking and wisdomI love to nice poetry. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful write - enjoyed!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
well, the main reason i attempt to write is because i want to hold on to the "glimpses of life"... |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Memories still. And yet, ever changing. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, And I think my mother does it best. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love it Lauren..hugs..never ending memories that keep enraveling over time.. nicely done~Victoria |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
EXCELLENT WRITING MY FRIEND you are amazing with words. |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
beautiful -Dave |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Lauren, I always feel like I am repeating myself whenever I reply to you lol. I think this is just beautiful as always Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The power of a few words that express so very much.... Very well said, Lauren... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Amazing what you hang on too glimpses of life dear butterfly....it is so hard to let some things go...God I wish I could sometimes.....you say this so well.....Luv ya girlie..... ok........so I responded to this once and it didn't show up.....again......I REPEAT......LOVE THE WORDS LADY.....HUGS TO YOU...... Like a red brick, |
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