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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2002-05-08 10:34 AM

Earth wind and fire
I call upon your name
Take away these lonely tears
And burn them in your flame

I feel your presence nearing
As tears flow warm as steam
Earth wind and fire come
To steal me from this scream

Sacred soil of grounding
I call upon the earth
Take my tears as anchor
To hold me to my birth

Elementals of the air
Borne in flowing wind
Blow away these tears of grief
And cast away my sin

Fires raised by life's passion
Sealed into heats core
Sear away the trace of tears
To leave me whole and pure

Fire, wind and solid earth
I call your name in plea
Take away water's power
And come to set me free.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

[This message has been edited by Kethry (05-08-2002 10:51 AM).]

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

1 posted 2002-05-08 10:39 AM

Auntie Kethp my absolutely favourite aunt, the one with the magic pen that writes exceptionally well. You know I love this, but then yes like mum I’m a little biased. Not because I wub you, but because I know really good writing when I see it, and this is it. Well written I love it, and yes the words are beautiful, as is the presentation. This is stunning and something very special. I'm printing this I love it, thank you xxxxx auntie Kethp,

I wub you xxx

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

2 posted 2002-05-08 10:52 AM

A very thought provoking piece Kethry, and written superbly. I hope your prayers are answered! How wonderful it would be to have those hurts seared away and be set free from painful memories!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-05-08 11:26 AM

"Fire, wind and solid earth
I call your name in plea
Take away water's power
And come to set me free."

(big hugggssssss) Oh Kethry, this is such a powerful cry from the heart, sweet friend, may the earth, wind, and fir all enshroud you and sear away the pain in your heart and may water become your ally and wahs all your tears away with laughter and hope! (kiss on cheek) My thought sare with you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2002-05-08 11:39 AM

Kethry~
Absolutely WONDERFUL !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2002-05-08 06:07 PM

Keth darling soul sister and keeper of truths incandescent flame what can I say except this is awesome in it’s beauty and power this is definitely a Quest song, Patryce should sing this in book two, I can hear her uniting the twain with this

Superb writing with utterly beautiful lines of wonder, as always darling heart when you write the universe stands in awe and reads the words of brilliance

Oh and i love it utterly utterly love it

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

6 posted 2002-05-08 06:15 PM

Hello Lynne

This was such a powerful and moving piece that captured me from start to finish. Your words were so heartfelt and honest.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

7 posted 2002-05-08 06:41 PM

Elementals of the air
Borne in flowing wind
Blow away these tears of grief
And cast away my sin

Very powerful, Keth...
Thanks for sharing it with us.

~airy hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

8 posted 2002-05-09 06:02 AM

the insight
the words of seeing
they belong to you, Keth
and now
they belong to us...thank you
jkf

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2002-05-10 11:24 AM

I always expect excellence when I open your poems... but sometimes, you exceed all expectations. *S* This is very powerful, Kethry, from first word to last. *S* Well written!

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