Open Poetry #20 |
Touchstone Memories |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Touchstone Memories ~*Marge Tindal*~ She caught a memory held it tight Pressed it to her heart hoping it would not take flight~ She turned the memories inside out Looking for that something she would learn to live without~ Oh, she shook the memory tree until it's branches were bare Caressed each thought with the tenderest of care~ In a velvet-lined box she laid her thoughts in the space she'd reserved for the memories when she'd need to re-trace her smile at the end of a perfect day spent the poetic verse ~ spirit sent In moments alone she has loved this land Then quietly, with a touch of her hand she placed a 'touchstone' in honor grand~ Knowing she'd come back when she needed the touch For never has a parcel of land been loved so much~ Just for me, as I leave this piece of land Thankful the memories garnered are overwhelmingly precious To leave a small piece of my heart buried among the memories here is to leave a tiny touchstone of myself ~*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Beautiful. And this one holds a special meaning for me today. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Marge you never fail to touch me with your words. This is exceptional. Sandra |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
marge, you make such shapes and thoughts into other shapes and thoughts enjoyed it much |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge~ You've gone and done it again.... In a velvet-lined box she laid her thoughts in the space she'd reserved for the memories when she'd need to re-trace'' I adore this stanza.... bring such meaning.... Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is a lovely piece Liz |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Perfect. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Travel safe... travel well till next we're caught within your spell... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You are a touchstone of mine and you will live forever in my library |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*My friends ... I move onward with joy for what will be ... The nester in me knows that what was is ... and will be again All things run 'round in a circle-of-keep returning us to just where we should be~ I now go with easy heart ... touchstoning memories that will never depart~ Thank you - CatalinaMoon, DarkStranger, LizzieLady, Karilea, BSquirrel ... MidniteSun~ I felt you would relate to it~ GreenEyes~ I fought hard for that one ... thank you~ InterLoper~ You bring tears to my eyes with your sweet sincerity~ *Hugs* LoganOfTheGentleSmiles~ I treasure the words of you in my mail~ *I am 'almost' (Ron- that's 'soon's cousin) done with my move to DeLand ... Whew ... I'll not be out of touch ... this computer makes the LAST carload ... ~ Thank you all for your wonderful friendship and well-wishes~ Bill has homesteaded this little heart ... and my joy is complete~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
(this is what Marge REALLY wanted to write!) So now it's time to say goodbye To all my memories here And all the things reminding me Of that sweet Balladeer. I say goodbye to this old desk Where I sat with delight As Balladeer and I exchanged Romantic verses every night. I say goodbye to doves in trees I wrote about so sweet And Balladeer's reply that they Were good enough to eat! Goodbye, front lawn. That Balladeer Assured me he would mow you But now that I am running out He'll never get to know you. This kitchen that we wrote about Lovemaking on the table... Will have to be remembered as A "could have happened..." fable. Green Swamp Road? I take my leave Now you shall never hear The foorsteps running down your lane Announcing Balladeer. Goodbye, dear bedroom. Poems I wrote Described you in your glory. I dreamed of Balladeer right here... But that's another story. Goodbye, dear living room and couch.. We shared so many goals Though Bal is for the Hurricanes And I'm a Seminole. Goodbye, dear house. I'm going now. The end is drawing near. Within your walls the memories will Remain of Balladeer. I've gathered one handful of dirt. I did it on a whim. Now every time I look at it My thoughts will be of him!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You always amaze me, wonderful writing. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart this is utterly spectacular, oh how happy I am for you, and how much I know of this feeling. Yes beloved sister you will be travelling on, but the memories, are with you and they will always be there. Wonderful piece of writing darling heart utterly utterly perfect. You really are an excellent writer darling heart, excellent. I swear I could see you whispering goodbye to the breeze. I love ‘Deer reply too, and I could use a smile right now, in fact most definitely I could. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Marge, my dear sweet friend. This is just astounding. How wonderful it is to be able to touch our memories. Continue to keep them in your velvet lined box and take them out from time to time to re-live and smile and cry. Pick up a rock from the yard and add it to the box. It will be a concrete reminder always of what you had. But sweetie, the best memories are yet to spring forth. I love you my friend, Hugs, Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, memories can be hard to leave behind. I hope you take all the good ones with you. This means a lot to me at the moment, like a little peice of my heart is in this as well. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: You may leave a little piece of your heart at your present house, but the memories of the good times there will fill up the empty space. Have a wonderful future! Betty Lou Hebert |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
this poem is absolutely stunning Marge... Hats off2UsweetPoetFriend on such an exquisite write... Hugs2uDearFriend... *~coco*~ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
hehe...you're not answering 'cause you know I'm right! I knew it!!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
quote:So now it's time to say goodbye To all my memories here and I must say it quick ! And all the things reminding me Of that sweet Balladeer. cause he is such a Hmmmm ! I'm NOT going to ADULT for you~ I say goodbye to this old desk Where I sat with delight As Balladeer and I exchanged Romantic verses every night. I wrote the romance you wrote the 'smartie' replies ! You blew it boy ... Now take this ... Right between the eyes~ I say goodbye to doves in trees I wrote about so sweet And Balladeer's reply that they Were good enough to eat! Now that's a fact You cannot deny ... Don't go there boy ... don't even try~ Goodbye, front lawn. That Balladeer Assured me he would mow you But now that I am running out He'll never get to know you. Now this is one you really blew ! You'll not get to see my 'all-over hue'~ This kitchen that we wrote about Lovemaking on the table... Will have to be remembered as A "could have happened..." fable. With my kitchen-cabinet muses, Silter, Twiter and Tambra too I doubt you could have 'made IT' Without doing them too ! Green Swamp Road? I take my leave Now you shall never hear The foorsteps running down your lane Announcing Balladeer. LOL ... this one is sweet Never did hear those size 12 feet~ Goodbye, dear bedroom. Poems I wrote Described you in your glory. I dreamed of Balladeer right here... But that's another story. Now here's one for the books... Never EVEN gave your 'glory' a look ! Goodbye, dear living room and couch.. We shared so many goals Though Bal is for the Hurricanes (boo-hiss-boo !) And I'm a Seminole. (to the core ... Wahoo !) Goodbye, dear house. I'm going now. The end is drawing near. Within your walls the memories will Remain of Balladeer. Yes, this house is haunted, that's why I'm moving away To rid myself of the memories of Balladeer BEGGING to stay ! I've gathered one handful of dirt. I did it on a whim. Now every time I look at it My thoughts will be of him!!! Yep ! Did you ever stop to think why a handful of DIRT would make me think of YOU ... OH ! Did that hurt !!! *I'll still be here for your touché~ **Sorry kids ... I'll get the rest of you SWEET people on the next run ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Thank you SWEETIE~ MarshaLove~ Oh yeah ... that Balladeer is a real corker ... Now, will somebody POP him for me ? !~ Marti~ Thank you, hon~ Yeah .. got a touchstone buried here and one for my new home with Bill~ Dee~ Glad to have touched you dear lady~ Best of luck and memories on your new move~ BettyLou~ Thank you my dear friend~ CoCoBaci~ Thanks lovie~ BALLADEER~ Gotcha~ Of COURSE you're right ... different chapter~ *HUGS* to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
AHA!! I knew it, Marge! A haunting memory you called me! I rest my case.... (and they're 11 1/2!) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ Oh .. you haunt my memory alright ! 11 1/2 ????? Well, whose size 12's are these ?????? (whoops) *HUGS* ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This has stayed gently on my mind through days when the werk monster tried to remove gentleness from my vocabulary. *S* It cradled you tenderly through the years Reflecting your joy, absorbing your tears - Your future now forces you to depart... But you'll carry it with you in your heart. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Marge~ You leave a mark wherever and whoever you encounter sweet lady Every place you reside will be special because you are there to make it so. This was beautifully penned poetess. *hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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