Open Poetry #20 |
Making No Sense |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Making No Sense You've been there before with me there, where I drift in an out of memories, shading me from the blinding light as you walk beside me in protective care. Your eyes never bruise as they stare, reading into me, lingering just long enough for me to feel a blush begin. Tell me please, my eyes beg, but in the moonlight, the shadows hide my want. I blink back my thoughts reaching out for your hand to touch my heart and feel, feel the rhythm that calls to you. It is there, when I am feeling loneliest there, that I can bring you to me at will. I can't write of love's intensity only of its caresses, as I lose the fear of its hold on me. I can't recall exactly each date to celebrate as every moment's meet remains special to me. I can't even write today of the depth of it all as I sit here, thinking how I am in transition, but feel that I may never rise above it all and feel the real of you again. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is lovely, Maureen. You speak these thoughts well. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Wonderful writing, enjoyed the read. |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Maureen this is one of your loveliest writes, its flow and construction are wonderful and its words are beautiful. I love this The way it flows over the page like a soft sigh Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Maureen, this is so powerfully heartfelt, sweet friend, I hope soon you can agian feel the joys of love in its completeness and write of all the thoughts you dream of writing, though the words of love you write are always wonderful and intense! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sandra, I think we feel the same in many ways...I enjoy your words and responses. thank you M Seymour, I am pleased you enjoy my words Thanks M Krissy, I live my life as a soft sigh. Thank you for your time you take to respond to me. M Noah, you are really special..and don't forget it ever. hugss M |
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