Open Poetry #20 |
Echo Chambers Of This Heart |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Echo Chambers Of This Heart ~*Marge Tindal*~ Reverberating sighs of delight echo throughout this longing night Cresting upon the break of morn covering me in your sweet adorn~ You come to me in gentleness at the peak of sun-in-rise I stretch to catch you smiling love light cascading from your eyes~ You spoon me to you in tiny sips of butterfly kisses searching sweet lips I curve to fit your yearning intensified embers burning~ With smiling eyes of sleepy dawn Oh, how you turn the morning on In softest sway at break of day My sweet love, how you replay the echo chambers of this heart~ *Bill, thank you foreverly for the tender arousal of my mornings~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh WOW!!! Margie gal, so very nicely penned, very enjoyable to read and the picture's beautiful....thanks for sharing this most delightful piece ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Oh how you turn the morning on." Very nice Marge...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Soft sizzle....you can almost smell the coffee and biscuits.... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Aww, how sweet it is. Sandra |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
You spoon me to you in tiny sips of butterfly kisses searching sweet lips'' Lovely Marge~ your words ring out to each soul, that reads...beautifully done...sweet lady... Lauren~ I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Your happiness is my happiness. |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
What a truly blessed lady you are Marge to have a love so inspiring and satisfying. Beautifully penned! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
breathtakingly awesome! You have done it again! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Auntie Margie girl my favourite aunt who’s laughter is like a sunbeam and who’s talent settles in sleepy sighs on dreaming eyes, this is wonderful, written with such sweet tenderness, and love, so much love it overflows in every pen stroke of you. Utterly wonderful I love it, and the image is awesome Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ Thanks hon ... he inspires me so each day~ JamesMichael~ Aahhhh, my favorite line also~ Karilea~ Oh yeah ... that's what I had in mind~ CatalinaMoon~ *smiles* n' *hugs* to you lady~ GreenEyes~ I thank you so very specially, my friend~ Seymour~ Awwww, thank you dear one~ Dulcinea~ I believe I am soooo very blessed with his love~ Thank you~ Kethry~ Thanks gal ... my heart on display~ Krissy~ Sweet girl ... your reply is poetry in itself~ Love you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Marge! How blessed you are to awaken like this in the mornings! WOW!! ~Hugs~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Enchantress~ Yes ... and the nicest thing is, it's not 'just-a-poem'~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
of butterfly kisses searching sweet lips I curve to fit your yearning intensified embers burning~" I *love* that. What a perfect way to wake up Margie girl Lucky lucky gal! And lucky Bill too! *hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmittenKitten~ Oooh, he stirs my morning with just the perfect blending of love~ Thank you, sweetie~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yanno?, I had a pome 'bout hearts and such too....somthin' bout "ya know ya just sorta, stomped upon my aorta"....guess since this one about "hearts" and such got so much good response I should find mine...ya think?....nice job as usual Margie!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Toe~ Welcome home ! Yeah .... you 'could' look that one up iffen ya' wanna ... but PLEASE don't go to any trouble on my account ! LOL ... you scalwag ... good to see you~ *Hugs* ~*Me ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: This is sensuous and romantic!! Very beautifully done. Betty Lou Hebert |
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