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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-05-08 01:26 AM



Echo Chambers Of This Heart

~*Marge Tindal*~

Reverberating sighs of delight
echo throughout this longing night
Cresting upon the break of morn
covering me in your sweet adorn~

You come to me in gentleness
at the peak of sun-in-rise
I stretch to catch you smiling
love light cascading from your eyes~

You spoon me to you in tiny sips
of butterfly kisses searching sweet lips
I curve to fit your yearning
intensified embers burning~

With smiling eyes of sleepy dawn
Oh, how you turn the morning on
In softest sway at break of day
My sweet love, how you replay
the echo chambers of this heart~


*Bill, thank you foreverly for the tender arousal of my mornings~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
tracie66
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1 posted 2002-05-08 04:08 AM


Oh WOW!!! Margie gal, so very nicely penned, very enjoyable to read and the picture's beautiful....thanks for sharing this most delightful piece
~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-05-08 04:48 AM


"Oh how you turn the morning on."
Very nice Marge...James

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3 posted 2002-05-08 06:57 AM



Soft sizzle....you can almost smell the coffee and biscuits....

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4 posted 2002-05-08 08:51 AM


Aww, how sweet it is.
Sandra

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5 posted 2002-05-08 10:23 AM


You spoon me to you in tiny sips
of butterfly kisses searching sweet lips''


Lovely Marge~

your words ring out to each soul, that reads...beautifully done...sweet lady...

Lauren~

I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
Could I have been anyone other than me
True poems rest between the words
Give hope a chance to float, it will

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-05-08 10:29 AM


Marge,
Your happiness is my happiness.

Dulcinea
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7 posted 2002-05-08 10:31 AM


What a truly blessed lady you are Marge to have a love so inspiring and satisfying. Beautifully penned!
Kethry
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8 posted 2002-05-08 10:55 AM


breathtakingly awesome! You have done it again!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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9 posted 2002-05-08 11:07 AM


Auntie Margie girl my favourite aunt who’s laughter is like a sunbeam and who’s talent settles in sleepy sighs on dreaming eyes, this is wonderful, written with such sweet tenderness, and love, so much love it overflows in every pen stroke of you. Utterly wonderful I love it, and the image is awesome


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2002-05-08 11:11 AM


Tracie~
Thanks hon ... he inspires me so each day~

JamesMichael~
Aahhhh, my favorite line also~

Karilea~
Oh yeah ... that's what I had in mind~

CatalinaMoon~
*smiles* n' *hugs* to you lady~

GreenEyes~
I thank you so very specially, my friend~

Seymour~
Awwww, thank you dear one~

Dulcinea~
I believe I am soooo very blessed with his love~
Thank you~

Kethry~
Thanks gal ... my heart on display~

Krissy~
Sweet girl ... your reply is poetry in itself~
Love you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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11 posted 2002-05-08 11:14 AM


Oh Marge!  How blessed you are
to awaken like this in the mornings!  WOW!!
~Hugs~

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2002-05-08 11:21 AM


Enchantress~
Yes ... and the nicest thing is,
it's not 'just-a-poem'~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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13 posted 2002-05-08 12:19 PM



"You spoon me to you in tiny sips
of butterfly kisses searching sweet lips
I curve to fit your yearning
intensified embers burning~"


I *love* that.
What a perfect way to wake up Margie girl   Lucky lucky gal!  And lucky Bill too!

*hugs*
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2002-05-08 12:29 PM


SmittenKitten~
Oooh, he stirs my morning with just the perfect blending of love~
Thank you, sweetie~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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15 posted 2002-05-08 12:46 PM


Yanno?, I had a pome 'bout hearts and such too....somthin' bout "ya know ya just sorta, stomped upon my aorta"....guess since this one about "hearts" and such got so much good response I should find mine...ya think?....nice job as usual Margie!!!
Marge Tindal
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16 posted 2002-05-08 12:58 PM


Toe~
Welcome home !

Yeah .... you 'could' look that one up iffen ya' wanna ... but PLEASE don't go to any trouble on my account !

LOL ... you scalwag ... good to see you~
*Hugs*
~*Me

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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17 posted 2002-05-08 02:01 PM


Marge:  This is sensuous and romantic!! Very beautifully done.

Betty Lou Hebert

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