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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-05-06 04:54 PM

“WOULD YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
If I were in pain
would you
comfort me…

If my heart wept,
would you
still love me…
~~~~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2002-05-06 04:59 PM

Bill - do you really have to ask? Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

2 posted 2002-05-06 04:59 PM

Bill darling boy This is utterly utterly perfect. YOU always manage to write such beautiful and smoothly flowing lines of pure wonder. I love this it contains the misty nebulous feel of the poem. I love it darling heart it’s excellent

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-05-06 04:59 PM

(BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) Oh Bill, I know deep down with all my heart with such a golden heart like yours she will always comfort you when you are sad are in tears, for who would not? (smiles) You are a very special person and a true angel of love and words, sweet friend, I wish you and your love a lifetime of happiness, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-05-06 05:17 PM

BC...a friendship goes far beyond the
depth of these words....You know the
answer, as well as I do...Of course...

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

5 posted 2002-05-06 06:22 PM

Bill, this is really touching.
Your words evoke emotions in my heart.
Utterly lovely...

"The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2002-05-06 06:29 PM

enjoyed

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2002-05-06 07:30 PM

From the heart.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-05-06 07:30 PM

Bill....you already KNOW the answer to this.

AND...you know how much I love these 20 or less!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

9 posted 2002-05-06 08:04 PM

Sometimes we need to ask, just to hear the answer.

Great little piece of hurt wonder.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

10 posted 2002-05-06 08:14 PM

Nicely done bill..hugs..as always

~Victoria

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

11 posted 2002-05-08 01:31 PM

Bill,

personally, i think the fact that we dare to ask means that we subconsciously have faith in our companion..i mean, if we don't have confidence in the other person, we won't set ourselves to be hurt, right?

thanks for the thoughts..

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

12 posted 2002-05-08 02:03 PM

If my heart wept,
would you
still love me…''

of course.....lovely thoughts...

Lauren~

I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
Could I have been anyone other than me
True poems rest between the words
Give hope a chance to float, it will

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