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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-05-07 09:08 PM




Poetry Plane

I ride upon
a paper plane
my ink
flows so well
where the current
takes it
I can
never tell
when I try
to steer it
stops dead
in mid-breeze
but when
I let it go
it takes me
home with ease



© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-05-07 09:28 PM


Helen, loved the way your ink flowed
gently down the page in this write.
~Hugs~

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2002-05-07 09:30 PM


but when
I let it go
it takes me
home with ease

this says it all Helen.  Well done. *s*

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)


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3 posted 2002-05-07 09:40 PM


Words are meant to go with the flow and the journeys are endless..

Very nicely said...

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4 posted 2002-05-07 09:57 PM




(smiles) Oh Helen, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, this is as if you have a paintbrush and a painting words upon the canvas so smoothly and gracefully! (kiss on cheek) This is awesome, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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