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Such Thoughts
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Such Thoughts |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Such Thought Lightly slipping into the depth of me The thought of you danced there softly Brushing against that Oh of bliss Bringing memories of your tender kiss I was recalled again to that place of me Where truth and trust frolicked blithely To return to the innocence of heart Where beauty’s face will n’er depart Softly breathing into the soul of me The touch of your mind came delicately Lacing into the feelings of delight Which roused within at your dear sight I felt the whole of my Oh come to you Swimming in the tranquil seas of true After that I remain here but also there Relaxing on the sand of your souls care Slowly sliding into the heart of me The feel of your breath came gently Stirring the fires which simmer on Stroking lightly over that souls song Calling forth the Oh that is all you Flying through the deeps of hearts rue Take me back to that place within Where loving you is never a sin Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 [This message has been edited by Marsha (05-07-2002 05:58 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Mushy, OH! Lovely, just lovely.  It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Mushy Marsha...this is very softly romantic. and sorry I don't pop in more often, (I think it's the pink--it tends to hurt my jaded eyes, but that's just ME) Smiles, I know it's your signature, tho, so I'll try harder! Enjoyed. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Stretch and fly beyond the bliss, love, come on now, I know you can! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lovely is the image of love and desire dancing to slow songs enjoyed this |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Marsha, simply a breath taking image here. Beautiful, and I mean beautiful! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
there is so much depth to your words, Marsha..and I just love this one *s hugsssss M |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you truly are a queen of romance and passion to us all! (kiss on cheek) May you always find that special place of joy in loves heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-07-2002 06:40 PM).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sweet sis... this is just so beautiful! your words dance magically across the page. i love when you display your heart for us to see such as you have here...lovely write. take care. i love you! amy "you can't stop |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Take me back to that place within Where loving you is never a sin But you do have to admit, Marsha...that loving is more fun when it is a sin... lovely poem!  ~lots of hugsLyra |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Dearest Mushy Marsha...such thoughts are awe-inspiring indeed! The flow was so gently provocative, well done dear lady! Bravo! |
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