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Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

0 posted 2002-05-07 01:14 PM

Such Thought

Lightly slipping into the depth of me
The thought of you danced there softly
Brushing against that Oh of bliss
Bringing memories of your tender kiss
I was recalled again to that place of me
Where truth and trust frolicked blithely
To return to the innocence of heart
Where beauty’s face will n’er depart

Softly breathing into the soul of me
The touch of your mind came delicately
Lacing into the feelings of delight
Which roused within at your dear sight
I felt the whole of my Oh come to you
Swimming in the tranquil seas of true
After that I remain here but also there
Relaxing on the sand of your souls care

Slowly sliding into the heart of me
The feel of your breath came gently
Stirring the fires which simmer on
Stroking lightly over that souls song
Calling forth the Oh that is all you
Flying through the deeps of hearts rue
Take me back to that place within
Where loving you is never a sin

Marsha

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (05-07-2002 05:58 PM).]

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-05-07 01:24 PM

Mushy,
OH! Lovely, just lovely.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2002-05-07 01:38 PM

Mushy Marsha...this is very softly romantic.
and sorry I don't pop in more often, (I think it's the pink--it tends to hurt my jaded eyes, but that's just ME)

Smiles, I know it's your signature, tho, so
I'll try harder!

Enjoyed.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

3 posted 2002-05-07 01:40 PM

Stretch and fly beyond the bliss, love, come on now, I know you can!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2002-05-07 04:10 PM

lovely is the image
of love and desire
dancing to slow songs

enjoyed this

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

5 posted 2002-05-07 05:59 PM

Marsha, simply a breath taking image here. Beautiful, and I mean beautiful!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2002-05-07 06:19 PM

there is so much depth to your words, Marsha..and I just love this one *s
hugsssss
M

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-05-07 06:40 PM

(smiles) Awwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you truly are a queen of romance and passion to us all! (kiss on cheek) May you always find that special place of joy in loves heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-07-2002 06:40 PM).]

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

8 posted 2002-05-07 10:31 PM

sweet sis...

this is just so beautiful! your words
dance magically across the page. i love
when you display your heart for us to
see such as you have here...lovely write.
take care. i love you!
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

9 posted 2002-05-07 10:35 PM

Take me back to that place within
Where loving you is never a sin

But you do have to admit, Marsha...that loving is more fun when it is a sin...

lovely poem!

~lots of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

10 posted 2002-05-07 10:39 PM

Dearest Mushy Marsha...such thoughts are awe-inspiring indeed! The flow was so gently provocative, well done dear lady! Bravo!

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