Open Poetry #20 |
You Inspire My Dreams |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
You Inspire My Dreams I need to know before the night is through do you love me as much as I love you I need to know before the break of day do you feel love from the words I say I need to know before I drift off to sleep do you want me heart forever to keep I need to know before going to my bed do you need me on those days ahead I need to know before I kneel and pray do you hear me although your far away I need to know before silence screams do you realise you inspire my dreams Hope ©2002 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Hope darling girl again your writing is outstandingly beautiful in its form it’s utterly utterly breathtaking in its beauty. Your heart is truly in this, I love it utterly utterly. Sometimes I swear you write with starlight, this is one of those times Perfect darling heart utterly utterly perfect. And yes I love it utterly As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HopeS, This is just lovely could not be better. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey thanks Marsha for you sweet reply yes perhaps I do see stars in each eye LOL Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Seymour , your kind compliments are very much appreciated Hope |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
HopeS, We all need to know...it's part of what keeps us going. I really like this poem a lot. Nice job. So much better than a "do you love me?" [This message has been edited by Larry C (05-07-2002 01:27 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Hope, this is so very lovely, sweet friend, I know deep down your love will always be so happy to inspire you and may he always hold you close for dear life! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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