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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-05-07 10:28 AM



You Inspire My Dreams

I need to know
before the night is through
do you love me
as much as I love you

I need to know
before the break of day
do you feel love
from the words I say

I need to know
before I drift off to sleep
do you want me
heart forever to keep

I need to know
before going to my bed
do you need me
on those days ahead

I need to know
before I kneel and pray
do you hear me
although your far away

I need to know
before silence screams
do you realise
you inspire my dreams


Hope ©2002

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Marsha
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1 posted 2002-05-07 10:36 AM


Hope darling girl again your writing is outstandingly beautiful in its form it’s utterly utterly breathtaking in its beauty. Your heart is truly in this, I love it utterly utterly. Sometimes I swear you write with starlight, this is one of those times

Perfect darling heart utterly utterly perfect. And yes I love it utterly

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-05-07 11:36 AM


HopeS,
This is just lovely could not be better.

HopeS
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3 posted 2002-05-07 11:39 AM


Hey thanks Marsha for you sweet reply
yes perhaps I do see stars in each eye LOL
Hope

HopeS
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4 posted 2002-05-07 11:41 AM


Thanks Seymour , your kind compliments are very much appreciated
Hope

Larry C
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5 posted 2002-05-07 01:27 PM


HopeS,
We all need to know...it's part of what keeps us going. I really like this poem a lot. Nice job. So much better than a "do you love me?"

[This message has been edited by Larry C (05-07-2002 01:27 PM).]

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6 posted 2002-05-07 02:59 PM




(sigh) Oh Hope, this is so very lovely, sweet friend, I know deep down your love will always be so happy to inspire you and may he always hold you close for dear life! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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