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rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

0 posted 2002-05-07 12:47 PM

Linger

Lost inside your eyes
Where I always want to be
Seeing your love that
Lingers like a soft whisper
And dances inside my soul.

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2002-05-07 01:23 AM

So pretty~

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

2 posted 2002-05-07 11:38 AM

*grins real big @ the dedication to this one*
-Dave

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-05-07 11:42 AM

rosepetals25
This is a charmer.

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2002-05-07 12:01 PM

excellent tanka my friend!
I havent written one in a long time, so you just might see one from me soon

love,
the other RosePetal, hehe

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-05-07 12:01 PM

(smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and I can tell Dave loves it so very much! (sigh) You always write of love so well, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2002-05-07 12:04 PM

Oh, you are so good at these!! Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

7 posted 2002-05-07 01:16 PM

Aha, writing about the Davester again.

Nicely done, Tara! *hugs*

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2002-05-07 04:40 PM

Positively lovely...James

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2002-05-07 05:14 PM

liked it

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2002-05-08 10:46 AM

Tara~

awww my friend, I love how you do these.....BEAUTIFUL!! hugsssss

Lauren~

I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
Could I have been anyone other than me
True poems rest between the words
Give hope a chance to float, it will

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