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0 posted 2002-05-07 12:47 PM






Linger

Lost inside your eyes
Where I always want to be
Seeing your love that
Lingers like a soft whisper
And dances inside my soul.



"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

© Copyright 2002 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-07 01:23 AM


So pretty~
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2 posted 2002-05-07 11:38 AM


*grins real big @ the dedication to this one*
-Dave

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3 posted 2002-05-07 11:42 AM


rosepetals25
This is a charmer.

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4 posted 2002-05-07 12:01 PM


excellent tanka my friend!
I havent written one in a long time, so you just might see one from me soon

love,
the other RosePetal, hehe

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5 posted 2002-05-07 12:01 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and I can tell Dave loves it so very much! (sigh) You always write of love so well, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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6 posted 2002-05-07 12:04 PM


Oh, you are so good at these!! Enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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7 posted 2002-05-07 01:16 PM


Aha, writing about the Davester again.   Nicely done, Tara! *hugs*
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8 posted 2002-05-07 04:40 PM


Positively lovely...James
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liked it
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10 posted 2002-05-08 10:46 AM


Tara~

awww my friend, I love how you do these.....BEAUTIFUL!! hugsssss


Lauren~

I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
Could I have been anyone other than me
True poems rest between the words
Give hope a chance to float, it will

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