Open Poetry #20 |
Love Took Us There |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Love took us on a journey To another time and place I felt so happy in your presence Safe and warm in your embrace We travelled the far horizons And dived into the jewelled sea On the crest of a wave of desire Was where you gave your love to me We scaled the peaks of passion And ran through valleys of emerald green We watched in awe as the sun set The most beautiful sight we'd ever seen I heard your words of love Upon the warm Summer's breeze I inhaled your scent through the flowers And saw your image through the trees The whispers in the wind Spoke your words of love so true As our hearts rehearsed love's symphony I surrendered my love to you Our love flowed along the creek And filled the river so serene We sampled the cool clear water As the sun's reflection gleamed Your love is all around me Every hour of every day In my heart you're always welcome And where I hope you'll always stay Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Your love is all around me Every hour of every day In my heart you're always welcome And where I hope you'll always stay" (smiles) Awwwwwwww, you are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, you have one of the most giving and loving hearts I know, this is an angelic artistic vision of pure love! (kiss on cheek) May you always hear his whispers in the wind and may they always melt your heart in every sunrise and sunset you share, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue, I surely hope that HE enjoys your poetry as much as we do....For you write such romantic and loving words... |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Hi Sue! I'm trying to decide whether I enjoy your romantic verse the most. Ah shucks! It's all good! Thanks for sharing. Shenachie |
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