Open Poetry #20 |
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Something About You |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
It's hard being me with the imprints of you following in my shadow. When I turn to touch you and you are unreachable, I feel tortured by the memories of your eyes last steal, your kiss of the moment being too short for my need, as I isolate each frame of you into my nights collective dreams. I pause you where I like, placing you in the fate of my mind, so that your darkness wraps around the frail of me and I find comfort in the silence of kissing eyes. Did you know I dream your colors, deep shades of you to keep the nights promises from drifting away? Did you know I have conditioned myself to a ritual of you never leaving my side, being imprisoned by love throughout the seasons of change? You are a maze to me, as I search the right path to reach your heart, and capture it to share a warm moment in time, when you give your heart to me in trust and the forgotten one, is forgotten, no more. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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bslicker![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
This is just wonderful ![]() bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hi bernie, where ya been hiding? *s thank you M |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Every single line is beautiful, Maureen. ![]() Lyra |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Elegiac. Did I spell that right? Enjoyed... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Lyra hugssssss missed you M and bsq..I can't tell you if you spelled it correctly as it isn't in my dictionary *s hugss and smiling a thank you anyway M |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
m, i felt the longing and yearning in this... your heart beautifully displayed. it's so hard to have love and yet have it just out of reach...*sighs* i know just how hard my friend...take care. amy ![]() "you can't stop |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) This is soooooo compassionately heartfelt, sweet friedn, and may your search be complete forever more and may loves trust always come between you and tie the knot between your heart and his! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I pause you where I like, placing you in the fate of my mind, so that your darkness wraps around the frail of me and I find comfort in the silence of kissing eyes. Did you know I dream your colors, deep shades of you to keep the nights promises from drifting away? Did you know I have conditioned myself to a ritual of you never leaving my side, being imprisoned by love throughout the seasons of change? Love these lines and the intensity. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WynterGal~ I like EVERYTHING about this lovely read~ EVERYTHING .... But this just sets the mood of a beautiful piece~ 'I pause you where I like, placing you in the fate of my mind, so that your darkness wraps around the frail of me and I find comfort in the silence of kissing eyes.' Gorgeous phrasing from the heart~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Maureen The love and longing was so very evident in your words, simply beautiful! Take care.......Sue Suetang |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Beautiful, touching, sad. Hugs to you, lovely write. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
nakdthoughts...Beautifully written poem with superb poetic language. ***Ivy Rose |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Amy..Love out of reach..that's it exactly... Noah, you are always so hopeful it makes me smile.*s Duncan, that's me..too intense..I even wear myself out just in thought *s Thank You. Marge, yes I liked those lines too, never knowing where they come from..I think there is someone else inside of me that I haven't met yet. *s hugss M Sue, Hope you are well, thank you Gemini, Thank you for reading me and responding. I appreciate it. Rose, Thanks for enjoying my words M |
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