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Martie

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California

0 posted 2002-05-06 07:27 PM

Fun Sun Sky Try

I am lifting the white from sky
Sifting it into a powder dry
To swirl with my silver spoon
To drink this mist off bloom of blue

Who dare inhibit the sky not I
I just want to blow some haze away
And dust the corners of the trees
Where spiders web has caught the leaves

I’d play in all this spring green thought
In dappled light be caught with naked face
And a bit of sunshine’s grace just out of reach
Of times great sweeping hand I can

Disturb the way that things must flow
A rhythm slow I’ll take to fast then dance this dream
With blues the beat and barefoot tapping dirt touched feet
To keep this drain from seeping out the pool’s cool rule

For I would make the water warm and sky to storm
Without a doubt I’d cry the rain all over me
And live as if mother nature be in tree
And with a whim lift up my chin with smile beguile

[This message has been edited by Martie (05-06-2002 07:28 PM).]

bsquirrel

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since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-05-06 07:29 PM

Yr try succeeded, mother nature's daughter. I'd like to drink the mist off blooms, too. Exquisite.

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

2 posted 2002-05-06 07:30 PM

Who dare inhibit the sky not I
I just want to blow some haze away
And dust the corners of the trees
Where spiders web has caught the leaves

Absolutely SUPERB writing, Martie.
I think you are amazing...
You can write about anything and make it sound artistic

~cobwebby hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-05-06 07:34 PM

Martie,
A romp in your mind is a thing of wonder. A delightful dance without the thunder.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2002-05-06 07:38 PM

I am lifting the white from sky
Sifting it into a powder dry
To swirl with my silver spoon
To drink this mist off bloom of blue

Wonderful Martie!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Martie

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California

5 posted 2002-05-06 07:40 PM

Mike..I think you do.

Lyra..so good to see you! I think YOU are amazing!

Sy..If I could romp with you
then I would not be blue

Chris...Thank you much!

[This message has been edited by Martie (05-06-2002 07:41 PM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-05-06 07:41 PM

...Exquisite!!...

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2002-05-06 07:45 PM

I am lifting the white from sky
Sifting it into a powder dry
To swirl with my silver spoon
To drink this mist off bloom of blue
===============================

For I would make the water warm and sky to storm
Without a doubt I'd cry the rain all over me
=================================

what you are doing with rhyme of late is making me smile with beguile

this is enchanting and delightful...
just like the poet

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

8 posted 2002-05-06 07:55 PM

Martie, I think you'd make a good Mother Nature.

*hugs*

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2002-05-06 08:32 PM

(smiles) YAY!!! Oh Martie, your words are always sooooo beautifully upbeat, sweet friend, this is a delightful springly poem, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) Your words always weave Mother Nature smiles, sweet friend, you truly are our flower girl, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Martie

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California

10 posted 2002-05-06 10:31 PM

Nancy...I love that word!

Jan--If it makes you smile..it's a good thing!

Michael...Thanks, but I just don't have the power. Glad to see you here!

Noah..You are always so sweet...thanks!

Elan
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since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

11 posted 2002-05-07 09:36 AM

Enchantress seems to have the correct words for the right poetry...and you, my dear, have a magical enchantment that makes us all want to hang around your ankles like little fairies waiting for their next delight from the Lady who Sings Spring...

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

12 posted 2002-05-07 11:09 AM

just the name makes it a place
worth putting in the mind
enjoyed this ms martie

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