Open Poetry #20 |
Fun Sun Sky Try |
Martie
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Posts 28049California |
Fun Sun Sky Try I am lifting the white from sky Sifting it into a powder dry To swirl with my silver spoon To drink this mist off bloom of blue Who dare inhibit the sky not I I just want to blow some haze away And dust the corners of the trees Where spiders web has caught the leaves I’d play in all this spring green thought In dappled light be caught with naked face And a bit of sunshine’s grace just out of reach Of times great sweeping hand I can Disturb the way that things must flow A rhythm slow I’ll take to fast then dance this dream With blues the beat and barefoot tapping dirt touched feet To keep this drain from seeping out the pool’s cool rule For I would make the water warm and sky to storm Without a doubt I’d cry the rain all over me And live as if mother nature be in tree And with a whim lift up my chin with smile beguile [This message has been edited by Martie (05-06-2002 07:28 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Yr try succeeded, mother nature's daughter. I'd like to drink the mist off blooms, too. Exquisite. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Who dare inhibit the sky not I I just want to blow some haze away And dust the corners of the trees Where spiders web has caught the leaves Absolutely SUPERB writing, Martie. I think you are amazing... You can write about anything and make it sound artistic ~cobwebby hugs Lyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, A romp in your mind is a thing of wonder. A delightful dance without the thunder. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I am lifting the white from sky Sifting it into a powder dry To swirl with my silver spoon To drink this mist off bloom of blue Wonderful Martie!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Martie
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Posts 28049California |
Mike..I think you do. Lyra..so good to see you! I think YOU are amazing! Sy..If I could romp with you then I would not be blue Chris...Thank you much! [This message has been edited by Martie (05-06-2002 07:41 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Exquisite!!... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am lifting the white from sky Sifting it into a powder dry To swirl with my silver spoon To drink this mist off bloom of blue =============================== For I would make the water warm and sky to storm Without a doubt I'd cry the rain all over me ================================= what you are doing with rhyme of late is making me smile with beguile this is enchanting and delightful... just like the poet |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Martie, I think you'd make a good Mother Nature. *hugs* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YAY!!! Oh Martie, your words are always sooooo beautifully upbeat, sweet friend, this is a delightful springly poem, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) Your words always weave Mother Nature smiles, sweet friend, you truly are our flower girl, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Nancy...I love that word! Jan--If it makes you smile..it's a good thing! Michael...Thanks, but I just don't have the power. Glad to see you here! Noah..You are always so sweet...thanks! |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Enchantress seems to have the correct words for the right poetry...and you, my dear, have a magical enchantment that makes us all want to hang around your ankles like little fairies waiting for their next delight from the Lady who Sings Spring... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
just the name makes it a place worth putting in the mind enjoyed this ms martie |
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