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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-05-06 03:40 PM


Unreasonable

Tell you what I'm gonna do.
If you don't have time for me
then I don't have time for you.
Although this may seem unreasonable
I learned this technique from you.
I simply have no available time
I have other things to do.
Oh yes there was a time
when I'd gladly make time for you
but now I've changed my mind.
I've become unreasonable too.

May06
2002



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1 posted 2002-05-06 04:51 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh James, your poetry at late has filled with tears and frustration, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright and all of this pain doesn't relate to your current life experiences! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-05-06 07:54 PM


No sense following their lead. It only leads to more pain for you later. enjoyed this, James.

*Jenn*

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

ecrivan
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3 posted 2002-05-06 09:21 PM


the games people play..wouldn't it be easier if partners said they just weren't interested any more?Liked your point and appreciate your desire to impart a lesson..good luck!

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (05-06-2002 09:22 PM).]

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-05-07 05:29 PM


Thank you Noah, jenn and ecrivan for the nice responses.
I believe you have to actively deal with someone if they are unreasonable...
Someone needs to bring this to their attention...
If a person is selfish doesn't someone need to call their attention to that...
or should a selfish person just find a giving person that will give and give and never receive anything in return...I could never be satisfied with that...
How about a relationship where a woman was being verbally or physically abused...shouldn't she call his attention to the fact that this is not acceptable...this is unreasonable?
People need to be aware of their actions and held responsible for their misactions.
How can you be reasonable with an unreasonable person.
Sometimes they may require a dose of their own medicine to understand that their actions are unacceptable...whatever it takes...James

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