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I walk there with you..
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I walk there with you.. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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know that I walk there in the hidden places where you look inside when you heart strings play songs of memories and of little girl stories I am the trees and sea that you hide beside when the sun peeks high over purple mountains I am the sand under your feet the dark stones that warm your skin I am the sound in your belly when you dream of love I am there under your skin just missing the miss of you know that I walk there with you ©Dark |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
songs of memories and of little girl stories I am the trees and sea that you hide beside ~*~ This brings back wonderful memories for me...thank you so much for my Monday morning wakeup... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am partial to your words, although I may not always respond, I always feel them behind the blue. ~soft smiles~ M * and they are always nice to wake up to... "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sunshine, good morning ms...thank you for your wave and coffee flavor warmth NT, thank you Maureen, I am pleased that my words make good feelings for you to wake to.. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I am the sound in your belly when you dream of love I am there under your skin just missing the miss of you know that I walk there with you Sigh~..you walk..some of us run to those that love like this.. Sincerely, Reg |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am the sound in your belly when you dream of love I am there under your skin just missing the miss of you ================================= how do you do this? go so deep beneath the readers skin? How ever you do it...promise us you will keep doing it  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Regina; run if you will.. would catch you on the first bounce.. thanks babe... Janet Marie, thank you sweet ms, just showing feelings babe, I hope I never lose them or the desire to let them show..OR your eyes reading them |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dark~You write as though you have known the reader forever.... However you accomplish this please don't ever stop.... ~morning hugs~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
when you dream of love I am there under your skin just missing the miss of you know that I walk there with you" DS~ Big sigh over here...that is such a loving comforting thought. Sweet poet, this is the perfect poem to wake up to  *hugs* ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Enchanting ...thank you ms, slow hug to you for your touch SmittyKitty..thanks hon, you are such a treat to my words |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
songs of memories and of little girl stories I am the trees and sea that you hide beside Dark - you must have heard me giggling as I peeked out to see who was watching. Love this one!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Your hyperbole is like an injection. Well done. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Chris, thanks lady, you bless me with the giggles. Sy, thank you sir, I appreciate you |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Chris, thanks lady, you bless me with the giggles. Sy, thank you sir, I appreciate you |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You have a tender heart, DS...It shows in this wonderful poem. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
DS darling boy this is an absolutely wonderful piece from you. I love it, The flow and the structure of this is excellent,. You really are a fine writer. I can really feel this deep in my soul, talking to me in that place where dreams reside. So mystical so intriguing darling heart really really excellent This is exquisite writing darling absolutely exquisite, I love it utterly utterly   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
I love the whole piece. I couldn't find a a part that was favored. I could hear every twig bend beneath my feet while hiding behind a tree. I could feel sand betwixt my toes and I could relax in the knowledge of a walk there with me. There's the man I chose. There's my territory.....Shakira |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I am the sound in your belly when you dream of love I am there under your skin just missing the miss of you know that I walk there with you Exactly. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Martie, thank you sweet lady...I appreciate you. Marsha, ms Mushy, thanks babe, might sweet of you to wave.. PhaChi, thanks ms, I enjoy your little smiles Duncan, thank you sir for the review and comments [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (05-06-2002 01:33 PM).] |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
it is the memory of forest walks and love given without condition that softens the missing of you when darkness comes Indigo [This message has been edited by Indigo (05-06-2002 01:35 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh my gosh, this is so lovely, sweet friend, I just love how your words always peak as though you are sympathizing in a heartfelt conversation with the reader! (sigh) May love always be the sound in your belly and always walk with you to forever, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light alays shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Indigo, special place for a special friend when darkness is the sun and there is no warmth thank you lady and warm thoughts to you Noah, you are a treat to the eyes amigo, thank you so much |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Sweet and calm. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'know that I walk there in the hidden places where you look inside when you heart strings play songs of memories and of little girl stories I am the trees and sea that you hide beside' Excellent write, DS...your words, as always, inspire me...I love this... sp    I've been down this road forever, |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
BSQ, thanks amigo.. Snowpants, bless your eyes..thank you so much |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
You are simply amazing mister!! |
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