Open Poetry #20 |
Poem to a Poet |
Martie
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Posts 28049California |
Poem to a Poet I have been held in plenty's arms With fingers touch let out my charms Been swept from earth to enter place Where fathom sees within my grace You touch the core of hidden treasure I'm lost in heart within this weather Time moves up or it moves down For you I open more than gown I yearn to feel you come to me Within the kingdom only we Take me to your skins request My touch to you would be hearts best Let me not wither here in wait For you this song is sung at gate And spring now bathes me once again In love you touched with just your pen |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Let me not wither here in wait For you this song is sung at gate And spring now bathes me once again In love you touched with just your pen" (smiles) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words always shine with the pure magic of poetry! (kiss on cheek) Your lovely words always bring spring to our hearts and sing to us like ahppy bird in a birdbath, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite...is the word that comes to mind at this moment Martie. *sitting here shaking my head and smiling* ~Hugs~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
soft whispers of love he gave to one in heart who he saves with pen and quill of such weight upon thy lawn beyond the gate... Whoever he is....he better get on his horse and get over there...Right Now! This is a beautiful poem Martie... He durn sure better read it... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
for you I open more than gown. Ooooh. Yanno...I think I am probably much more intimate here on these blue pages, within my words, than I have ever been.... sssh..don't tell anybody! Understanding hugs and smiles... |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Martie~ This is beautiful...poetry brings so much to our lives. I echo Serenity, I have shared so much within my words here in these blue pages than I ever would have imagined doing before. A lovely write poetess... *hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Martie, this is such a sweet poem. Nice work, my friend. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'm on the phone to Delta as we speak!!!! Martie...you are GOOD!!!!!!! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Such soulful beauty! This is a work of art Martie! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie lady loving love and her woman feelings is a poem to itself enjoyed this ms |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
WOW! SUPERB!, not that I'm partial to rhyming, but this is awsomme! This shows the diversity of your talents. You are the best Love ya Liz |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok. So you leave me wondering how to respond when all I can do is smile... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You touch the core of hidden treasure I'm lost in heart within this weather Time moves up or it moves down For you I open more than gown I yearn to feel you come to me Within the kingdom only we Take me to your skins request My touch to you would be hearts best ============================= Oh Martie...how wonderful that you wrote me this beautiful poem...I am so...ERRR..what? not for me? hahaha OK YEAH I KNEW THAT!!! you KNOW I love this ...and may I say thats one heck of a muse ya got there me girlie very very cool write Ms Martie...love that last line. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Martie~ Such a beautiful poem, very warm and sweet, loved it very much ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, I just met Balladeer at Delta, we're both coming. An exquisite write. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Intelligent eroticism. -- as a poem should be [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-06-2002 02:41 PM).] |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thank you all so much for these lovely replies! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Martie...I'm not used to seeing rhyme drip from your pen, but I must say that you do it so very beautifully ~hugs of rhyme Lyra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ 'I have been held in plenty's arms With fingers touch let out my charms Been swept from earth to enter place Where fathom sees within my grace' And I've just been touched with poet's pen~ Martiesque at her best~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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