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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Where Oh where to us in histories place Inters our lives and bones in space. And where oh where can I confine Within the myth of sweet define. To salve the half this moments daft To circumcise the full redraft To know within the heart of me This thing that crawled from out the sea For all the slime still clings the core And cannot shake the cling of more. Nor can I face spreading cancer Of my deepest seated answer I searched in every way the grail And failed in every way of fail I feel a monkey in a cage With naught of payment or of wage It needs a cleaning or we die The only answer to our vie. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (05-05-2002 04:52 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is very much like that, a dis-ease when we search for what we please and think the answer beyond our grasp when it sits here, in our laps find within the searching place I find it in the smile of face and see it here, from your touch, in your writing, and dreams of such... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-05-2002 08:39 AM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy, this is utterly perfect the simplicity the elegance and the grace this is written with is perfectly delicious. The questions within that have the answers written inside. You are utterly utterly perfect when it comes to insight wisdom, and I love it utterly but you knew that didn’t you. Wonderful writing as always.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, What you say is true that's why you are my sunshine.  Marsha, You are an utter delight. And I do enjoy your flattery. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
To know within the heart of me This thing that crawled from out the sea Oh but I like this very much!  I often thing that "inner space" is indeed the "final frontier"...and now you are going to go and get me thinking again, and that can be dangerous...  Happy Sunday Sy! (raising coffee cup to ya) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, And the happiest of Sundays to you. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vandana, Thank you so much. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh where to us in histories place Inters our lives and bones in space. And where oh where can I confine Within the myth of sweet define. To salve the half this moments daft To circumcise the full redraft =========================== Nor can I face spreading cancer Of my deepest seated answer =========================== I feel a monkey in a cage With naught of payment or of wage It needs a cleaning or we die The only answer to our vie. =============================== And these will be the coolest lines I will read all day....... Oh where to us in histories place Inters our lives and bones in space. To salve the half this moments daft To circumcise the full redraft You turn a phrase in amazing ways Sy-babes... and the way you bend our minds with your rhymes aint half bad either *L* Me thinks Dragon and Sage shared this page ... and its all the rage. "And where oh where can I confine Within the myth of sweet define. I've got a bottle of raspberry wine ... shall we toast the myth at your place or mine? *winkiewinkie*   |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
*storing away the wisdom of your words* This was insight at its best my dear friend...so good to read you once again!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy, I always enjoy the insight of your words and the flow....I feel like I could be reading Poe....the Raven sitting on my shoulder... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Your comments are chocolate to a chocoholic. And the raspbery wine sounds just fine. Just fly at even tide and I will meet you in the sky. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky Devina, Thank you dear. Mangus, A delightful comment for I love Poe. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! This is wonderful, sweet friend, it too saddens me to see us all getting ourselves lost in there and wasting time yearning while we should always be here keeping active with siles and hope until by suprise there takes us by suprise! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, You are a good friend, thanks for the read and the bump. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Sy~ Hmmmm...those are some deep thoughts. Once again you share a profound message with perfect fluidity and rhyme. Your poems glide with such grace....I never get stuck along the way. *hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmittenKitten Krista, a nice comp, thank you. |
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