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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-05-04 07:34 PM

Obscuring the Sensible

All day I thought of you,
feelings obscuring the sensible.
At hand was an invitation of words
to move the barrier slightly to the right,
allowing a breakdown of my will.

I thought about my thoughts
and how I am thinking too much
and doing too little, trying
to make sense of it all.

I need a walk in the rain,
to cleanse my soul,
a journey towards an end
with you at its beginning.

Do you hear my spirit talking,
can you feel the whispers
as they touch you on the cheek
from lips that burn
from unanswered questions?

I mouth my softness to you,
caress your ego with my take
waiting for the perfect moment
to spin me into dreams again.

I watch for you blindly, remembering,
wondering the if evers,
the teasing of wants,
the poems once written
that stole the me,
imprisoning the feel of you
in my heart, locked.
I have lost that key somewhere
along the path we traveled.

You could walk away today or tomorrow
and it wouldn't change a thing.
For all my tomorrows
are made from my todays
and all my todays
were yesterdays' desires.
And yesterday,
you broke down my walls
entering into my world
of forever.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-04-2002 07:37 PM).]

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2002-05-04 08:40 PM

Maureen darling girl this is an absolutely wonderful piece from you. I love it, The flow and the structure of this is excellent,. You really are a fine writer. I can really feel this deep in my soul, talking to me in that place where dreams reside.

This is exquisite writing darling girl absolutely exquisite, I love it utterly utterly

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Elan
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

2 posted 2002-05-04 08:51 PM

And yesterday,
you broke down my walls
entering into my world
of forever.

~*~

I understand this, very well...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-05-04 09:49 PM

(smiles) YES!!! YES!!! Those walls of yesterday have indeed been bulldozed down, and now it is your time to lead every today into tomorrow, holding a smile of true love and hope dear! (kiss on cheek) This is absolutely beautiful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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