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Don't Want To
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
"Don't Want To" © 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved If I could I'd pack my clothes And move into your pocket 'Cause with the phase that time flows I'm afraid I will forget But I... These walls drip with memories That you and I shared together Kisses on which our lips fead They walk the road to never But I... Don't want to leave You the way you are Don't want to breathe The air that's apart I don't want to meet Anyone else when you're gone With you is where I belong You think I don't hear you cry I do but I can't get through And it eats me from inside To see your drown in your blues But I... Don't want to Slay That soft heart of yours Don't want to lay Vows outside the door I don't want to say I don't love you when I'm gone With you is where I belong Don't want to 'cause With you is where I belong... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Hallucination WOW this is utterly utterly delightful you’ve written an absolute diamond here. The flow of thought in this is wonderful and the rhyme absolutely divine. Absolutely perfect  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
very nice..... |
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