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Open Poetry #20

Jewels in Your Eyes

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2002-05-04 02:45 AM

Jewels in Your Eyes

Gaze of black onyx
Clear aquamarine smiling
Diamonds in starlight
Scarlet rubies of passion
Crystal teardrop of splendor

Elizabeth Santos

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2002-05-04 03:07 AM

Pretty sparking tanka, lady! Beautiful, and tanka chien

Imagination is more important that knowledge
~* Einstein said so *~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-05-04 09:57 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, may true love always be the diamond in the rough in your heart softened by happiness forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-05-04 10:23 AM

Which gives me more smiles...this beautiful Tanka...or Mysteria's comment...

...thank you, Ladies...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-05-04 10:32 AM

Elizabeth,
And this is an added jewel. Love Sy

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-05-04 10:43 AM

Beautifully done Liz...I need to learn how
to write these...course...I would never get
to your caliber....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-05-04 11:10 AM

Beautifully written Tanka, Elizabeth.
I must try one sometime.
~Hugs~

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