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Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2002-05-03 08:24 PM

your fingertips brush gently through my hair
gazing into your eyes...I can feel the weight of your stare
my lips pressed against yours, the heat melts me and you
your arms circle around my waist, never have I found a love this true

the happiness I feel inside my heart can be seen all over my face
your skin warm beneath my hands is as soft as silk and lace
I feel your body close to me, as I breath in the essence of who you are
Looking into your eyes, I feel the universe turn, as we are surrounded by a shining star

for a moment we both gaze out the window, as amethyst and orange paint the sky
in this one infinite moment our love is all that matters, everything else just fades goodbye
i lay you down on the bed, my body just barely touching you
making sweet love together, we watch this day fade into something new

tomorrow

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-05-03 08:28 PM

(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I know your love is always going to blessed by the wonderful words you write! (kiss on cheek) This is a soft and beautiful love poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-05-03 08:40 PM

Very tender and romantic Amy.
Great imagery....enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-05-03 08:42 PM

Wonderfully warm and sweet. Thanks for sharing yr thoughts.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2002-05-03 10:12 PM

Amy,
your love poems always touch me, the tenderness and devotion found in your words are always just so gorgeous. Every single word, I loved here, and I'm keeping them

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

5 posted 2002-05-03 10:23 PM

Amy,

Awwwwwwww! I think I say almost everytime I reply to one of your poems LOL. It fits so well though

I love it, as usual.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

6 posted 2002-05-04 11:44 AM

Amy darling lil sis of my heart OH MY This is simply stunning writing, utterly utterly stunning. How beautiful the words in this are, the flow is as smooth as silk, the phrasing perfect, and the timing is absolutely spot on. Without a doubt you are the best at capturing a thought in a net of wonder.

I should have known when the sunlight came stroking my face with it’s golden light that this morning was going to hold a special treat, and of course it did.

Do I love this? Yes you know I do

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2002-05-04 04:07 PM

"Your skin warm beneath my hands is as soft as silk and lace"...beautiful line...James

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