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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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So much sadness pours through my soul sometimes with feelings I can't explain floating in hollow, visits from emptiness emotions over ridden with lasting pain. Again my sorrow seems carried on the breeze wind chimes blowing the tales of my time aloneness again from mind to quill my epitath of words written in rhyme. Endlessly searching to reach that plateau where yesterday and tomorrow might meet when the light dawns on the new horizon and sorrow finally makes it lasting retreat. Like a red brick, in a white wall somebodies brush forgot to paint... lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (05-02-2002 10:08 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh how sad. I hope you feel happier soon. I understand this feeling, and you wrote it well. Sandra |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As sadness is another beautiful part of our humanity, you have written a tribute worthy of the depth of soul. ThisDiamond |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Donna, this is so achingly sad. But oh so beautifully written. ~Hugs~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggssssssss) Oh Donna, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I too hope very soon you find all the stillness of heart your heart desires and true happiness will always sing to your soul! (kiss on cheek) my thoughts are with you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Donna~ I know how you feel...or at least I could relate to every word above. This was beautifully written sweet poetess...don't give up searching. *hugs* ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ I felt a gentle uplifting for you with these thoughts - 'when the light dawns on the new horizon and sorrow finally makes it lasting retreat.' Stretch for that horizon, hon~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Donna, tomorrow is the day it will happen tomorrow the start of that healing wake early and see it arrive in a sun colored limo with majestic mountain fenders |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
heart hugs and peace to all at poetry land. DS....you always have had that way of giving me those special words that I find such solace in ......thank you for that.....thank you all for your kindnesses.....  Like a red brick, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I think we are given the feelings of sadness for a reason, and that is to experience joy more fully. I can sure identify with your poem as I ride a roller coaster of feelings and have my entire life, but I have learned to  the waves, and eventually the sun shines. May you feel the warmth of the sunshine soon. Imagination is more important that knowledge |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna The heart takes so many roads in life, and there is a reason for the one that goes down, that is the up. Hugs for this writing which is the first step. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thanks to both of you dear ladies...Like a red brick, |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
donna, but still you endure. Hugs and may peace visit you soon. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Donna, I too find myself trying to deal with those sad parts of my life...I feel that expressing the emotions...as you have here....works wonders.... You have written a beautiful poem of intense feelings.. |
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