Open Poetry #20 |
One With You (One Syllable Latter Peom) |
Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
"One With You" Kiss My Lips And My Heart Feel My Pulse Stop And Start Look In My Eyes To Find That Your Eyes Are In Mine Stroke My Skin With Your Stare See In Me The Same Care Love Me Now Make Me Whole Let Me Mate With Your Soul. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Nice presentation. Oh wait, one syllables only? Good job! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Oh Bonnie, this is wonderful, I love it, I love it, you always amaze me with your gorgeous words! (kiss on cheek) This would make a wonderful challenge for us all, sweet friend, I think I'm going to try this too, YAY, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
Oh Do I Like this! Well Done And Per Fect Ly! ~Sydney McLean |
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