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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2002-05-02 10:26 PM

Sweet
Pure vanilla dropped upon the words
Lavished in a language as we speak and seek
Body talk, in breezes and in thunderous strikes
Sweet

Warm
Glowing coals that ignite in sudden heat
Lasting longer as we grow so much, closer to the touch
Songs of all the travels taken shared without a sound
Warm

Deep
Melting into every thought an accompaniment majestic
Lining every mile on our own erases of the aching of alone
Dreams and wishes filled with thoughtful admiration
Deep

Sleep
Assured of respite when the struggles drain us weary
Devoted to the note and say, of tender triumphs every day
Resting in the arms of my true other rocking on the waves
Sleep

Copyright Kkh 5/03/02

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (05-02-2002 10:26 PM).]

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

1 posted 2002-05-02 10:54 PM

"Sweet
Pure vanilla dropped upon the words
Lavished in a language as we speak and seek
Body talk, in breezes and in thunderous strikes
Sweet"

Kathleen~ Wow...what beautiful thoughts and images. And you've used such a unique style. I really really like this

*hugs*
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-05-02 11:00 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I just love how you began and started each stanza in chronological fashion with the word from your title and made such sweet lovely sentiments for each word throughout the poem! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

3 posted 2002-05-02 11:06 PM

What a wonderful presentation. Aweet, warm, deep sleep...even the construction has a dreamy quality to it..excellent

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