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Following the Wind....Inspired by "The Road to Yesterday"
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Following the Wind....Inspired by "The Road to Yesterday" |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet 
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Following the Wind The wind caresses the scenery as it flows at every height and when it reaches where I stand it whispers into the night It speaks to me of memories and sings softly of my pain and then it turns and leaves me and I am alone again The wind is always moving it never dwindles behind it keeps on going forward and now, so will I. Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too [This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (04-09-2002 12:49 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Hooray for the conclusiion and you nice work. Well done  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is soooooo beautifully touching, sweet friend, may you always follow the wind and let it grace you and lift your spirit with freedom and love! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krista, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Interloper~ Some lessons just trickle into your heart but their impact is just as powerful. Thank you for the hooray Noah~ Thank you for bringing your sweet self to my poem. Your replies always leave me smiling *hugs*Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes we can go quietly with the wind... where I live, you're lucky if you can stand still some days... I enjoyed this! Thank you! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
SK darling girl this was as usual for you utterly utterly wonderful. Do you know how utterly beautiful this poem is? The style is pure you, breathtakingly lovely and the execution is without doubt one of your finest ever. I’ve really missed your writing darling girl where have you been, never mind your back now, and thank goodness for it. Please stay. I love this utterly   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
It's good to have that positive feeling, hiding in the background, and then suddenly it takes over. I love this. Sandra |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Sunshine~ Yes, sometimes it just takes your hand and leads you forward. And where you live, it sounds like it drags you down the street! Thank *you* so much for your kind words Mushy~ I am just "utterly" pleased and delighted by your reply  Your praise is too high! But thank you so much for your sentiments....to be missed is such a heart-warming feeling! Thank you! Big hugs to you Sandra~ exactly...I love being surprised with a good feeling. Thank you for stopping in! Hugs to all!  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and when it reaches where I stand it whispers into the night ============================= this is a lovely thought and image... a sincere, cadence kissed gem of pen here... and so nice to see your name on the page again SM.. I love the resolve and quiet strength this speaks of. well done poetess, welcome back how about how good it feels to finally forgive you |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If I inspired this, I'm ecstatice! It's terrific and with a perfect ending. No, the wind never blows backward....I'd never thought of that before....very nice writing, smitten one |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
JM~ Your words always wrap me up in a warm glow Thank you for enduring kindness and sincerity sweet poetess. It's great to be back!  Balladeer~ I'm the ecstatic one for having a reply from you! I've long admired your work. Thank you for the inspiration Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
it is much easier to let the wind be at your back, than to try and walk against it... perhaps we should all learn to pay attention to the way the wind is blowing..and learn to move forward... I enjoyed.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SmittenKitten~ Your inspired thoughts are just so lovely~ I liked this ..... 'It speaks to me of memories and sings softly of my pain and then it turns and leaves me and I am alone again' But ... mostly I enjoyed the fact that you are moving forward~ It is such a pleasure to have you home~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hiya SmittenKitten... I found this gem and had2let ya know I very much enjoyed reading your poem... Smiles2USmittenPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Coco~ Thanks for visiting while you were digging around back here! *hugs*Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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