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ctowen
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0 posted 2002-05-02 06:34 PM


To have ...
hand in hand,
in sharing another

Or so,
handed down
by Sister or Brother

In sense,
a part of,
family or other

Then too ...
to have not
but wishing it not so

Reaching for
what you want,
not willing it to go

In tense,
we belong
'til circumstance
can show

create an addiction .... share a smile!!

© Copyright 2002 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-05-02 06:50 PM


...Perfect!!...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Larry C
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2 posted 2002-05-02 06:53 PM


ct,
I like this format. Excellent write.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

vandana
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3 posted 2002-05-02 07:09 PM


enjoyed
Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-05-02 07:21 PM




(smiles) Oh Craig, I only wish that all the world could reach out to one another in peace and treat each other like sisters and brothers across every border, sweet friend, this is absolutely touching! (big hugggssssss) I wish for this harmony to fill all the world, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2002-05-02 10:19 PM


Craig, this is excellent.
Sandra

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6 posted 2002-05-02 10:38 PM


craig, your words really spoke to me tonight....this is truly incredible in its depth and meanings....well done, into the treasure box it now goes to be read over...and over again.....thank you.

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)


BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
7 posted 2002-05-03 01:27 AM


Reaching for
what you want,
not willing it to go

Too take the good with the bad and make the most of it~  that was message I was getting.
Enjoy your writing and all that it conveys.
Nicely done~

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In Your Poetic Mind
8 posted 2002-05-03 12:12 PM


Craig~

I am reading between the lines with this....and is has much deepness, and strong emotion.... Big 'ole Bear hugsssss....

Me~

I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings
Could I have been anyone other than me
True poems rest between the words
Just give hope a chance to float up

ctowen
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9 posted 2002-05-03 01:02 PM


Nancy -dancing with you in the summer rain ...
now that would be perfect!!

Larry -thank you kindly, sir.

V -I enjoyed your reply as well.

Noah -Thanks for the comment .... Peace and Harmony ...sounds like sister and brother to me.

Sandra -Wouldn't it be excellent if we all felt like we belonged ... thanks for the comment.

GS - And thank you, please do not lose me amongst such treasures.

Lori -I try to write in ways that everyone can find themselves .... may the good overwhelm the bad always!! Thanks!

Lauren - Hi "Me"! .... I accept all hugs, especially BIG 'OLE BEAR one's.
Here is to the words between the lines .... "HEAR,HEAR!!!"   - ME 2

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