Open Poetry #20 |
Someday is Finally Here |
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Someday is Finally Here By Larry Chadwick Don’t ever forget when times were hard, When you were just tired and so poor. How you struggled for courage, Longing for the day you’d finally soar. Surviving by that future thought, Someday you’ll look back and smile. It seems the sacrifices paid off, That extra effort so worth while. So now you recall when times were hard, And by contrast today is a simple trial. Aren’t you glad that you didn’t ever forget? It’s good to finally look back and smile. May 1, 2002 Reflections of college married with children! It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Funny, I was just thinking about "those days"--and I was also wondering about how we never recognize our own happiness as it occurs...A struggle? Sure. But the rewards were smaller and much more satisfying!!! But then again, who knows? I could be BLISSFUL at this moment and not even know it!!! (ACTUALLY, I DO KNOW...and I am... ) Wonderful write to get me thinking Larry! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
positive reinforcement in verse reflections off yesterday into tomorrow wise redeeming words thank you for this! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Larry, everyone should at some point step back and take a long hard look at where they have been and how much easier it is now. I enjoyed this so much...as I sit here missing my sister Nightshade/Chris who just left for home... Hope you had time to catch our duet last night, To dance in red leather. Thanks also for your encouragement! Love this one! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, I haven't reached that point yet but I'm trying, SON! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karen, LOL "I could be BLISSFUL at this moment and not even know it." You crack me up. Thanks for the fun and it was my pleasure. dor, I like your succinct summary. Glad to be of help. Thanks. Nancy Lee, Hey a good time for reflection. Found that dueling sister duet. I love it. And thanks I do agree. Pops, Oh you never were poor! Thanks. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Larry~ one should never forget where they come from....nice my friend~ Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Larry darling boy this is wonderful truth wisdom and a fabulous reminder to us all. Where indeed did those days go, and do I smile, yes naturally. Fabulous writing darling boy and I love it utterly. I’m learning how much we learn and continue to do so, really superb writing darling boy Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sounds like you and they are on the downhill side of the mountain.... Enjoyed this Larry C. Those were the days! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, So true dear friend, so true. Thanks. Mushy, Funny how time slips away. Thanks so much. Magnus, Those days seem farther away when you put it like that! Thanks. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Positive thoughts abound! It's always nice to put life in perspective, especially if the present tense is a more comfortable place in time than the past. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, Perspective matters. Thanks Kac. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks, I needed this!!! |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
I really liked this, Larry. It seems to me that those who pine for 'the good old days' have forgotten the difficulties that they were having then! Shenachie |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lori, Just in time then! Your welcome and thank you always. Shenachie, You are absolutely write. Thanks a bunch. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Yeah! Perfect. Thanks, Melton |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
It's definitely hard to surrender to happiness, when things aren't happy. But you kinda do just have to surrender to it, and take the day for what it is. Thanks for reminding me. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Melton, Well...Thank you! bsquirrel, So true, but perspective helps. Thanks. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! [This message has been edited by Larry C (05-02-2002 03:28 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
When I was poor I didn't know it. I thought everybody lived the same way |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Interloper, They do. Just with less sacrifice. Thanks. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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