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Timeless Waves Upon The Shore
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Timeless Waves Upon The Shore |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Sun withered hands upon the page as words of love fall into eyes Once the rout and the word of sage a softness felt of trembling sighs Tear of eyes fall freely of sight into darkness of never more Watchful in hope of brightest light as time and waves crash sandy shore The steps of one now fading fast as tide takes love from yawning breach Love's timeless walk now in the past as winds flow high and steal from speech Whisper of wind’s call turns an eye toward the hill upon the dunes as stars burn holes into dark sky and whistles play between two loons Two hands once held now feel the cold of chill into the wane of night Lone love’s reveal secrets not told as hungry gulls take into flight. A barren shore beyond the dunes as penned upon the written page in wait of love’s soft flowing tunes when curtain shows once more the stage [This message has been edited by Magnus (05-02-2002 07:54 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Encore, encore!!! This is a wonderful melodramatic view of a heart yearning for stillness which is finally greeted with the crashing of raptures waves, sweet friend, I love it! (big hugggssssss) This is absolutely wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Magnus Hi there, this is superb writing skill, the way this flows is simply amazing, mum is so right when she says YOU are a wonderful writer, because this is seriously good writing. I love it I really do   Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Magnus, You are good at this. Nice write. Sweet thoughts and images. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ This is truly lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Luv this, Barry. You always outshine yourself. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A barren shore beyond the dunes as penned upon the written page in wait of love’s soft flowing tunes when curtain shows once more the stage ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love this entire piece but especially this last stanza. Wonderful Barry! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, A soft and lovely write, enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Whisper of wind’s call turns an eye toward the hill upon the dunes as stars burn holes into dark sky and whistles play between two loons This is marvelous!! Love it!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ya know, every time I read your work, I see a new background, a new forefront and a new personal best. Well done. ThisDiamond |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Magnus~ Timeless waves upon the shore....the title alone I love to savour. This whole write flows softly into my heart....beautifully penned sir. *hugs* ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Whisper of wind’s call turns an eye toward the hill upon the dunes as stars burn holes into dark sky and whistles play between two loons excellent poetry, Barry  ~many hugsLyra |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
this is really good, magnus -Dave |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Whisper of wind’s call turns an eye toward the hill upon the dunes as stars burn holes into dark sky and whistles play between two loons Fantastic writing Magnus. You're a wonderful and talented poet, Sir. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Egads...where WAS I that I did not see this one fly by? I found a keeper, I found a keeper... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Barry~ I so enjoyed this.....I love poems with "sea" titles your title really drew me in, but your work does that..... hugssssLauren~ I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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