Open Poetry #20 |
A Page or Two From My Heart |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
A Page or Two From My Heart My life has always been like a book, easy to read, but sometimes hard to understand You all know what I'm talking about, all the things of us life demands Rays of sunshine and happiness splashing over into rainy days of blue These are the pages of my heart, you understand...I know you do On pages one and two are my family, the ones I love so much There is no other like a Mother's touch She has several pages dedicated to her kindred spirit and heart This book though of my life isn't in exact order, there is no clear start The pages in the middle represent the love of my life that on a September day I found These pages make up who I am, they look silent when read, but they really are full of so much sound The cover isn't that fancy, but what you find inside is wonderful and true Yes all these pages of my heart, have my successes and failures, my fears, and my dreams coming true Some might look at this book called my life, and call it cliche, but to me it's my hearts ink It's what I write about, and the passion is what allows me to think Some people don't understand me, they just see the smile on my face If only they looked deeper, they'd realise this girl hasn't been in just one place So take a page or two from my heart, but tread carefully for it's the essence of me Once or two a kind soul has read those pages, and helped to set me free If what you read, you just can't read no more Just put it back up on the shelf, and we'll call it an even score "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do" [This message has been edited by Aimster (05-02-2002 06:51 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Amy, Nice. Nope...I'm not putting it back. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hmmmmm...a different story told on every page I bet...*s hugs M |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"So take a page or two from my heart, but tread carefully for it's the essence of me Once or two a kindred spirit has read those pages, and helped to set me free If what you read, you just can't read no more Just put it back up on the shelf, and we'll call it an even score" (smiles) Oh Amy, this is sooooooo beautiful, yes, it doesn't matter if every page of your life is a cliche or not, for you are a wondeful loving person and friend and I am always blessed when you share your loving thoughts from your heart to us all! (kiss on cheek) May you write many future sequels of true happiness, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is a book that asks to be read over and over again. . . wonderful Amy. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful writing Amy...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sis of my heart This is seriously excellent writing, the flow of this is perfect, the internal pace and the construction cannot be bettered. And the form perfect absolutely perfect. As for putting the journal that is you back on the shelf, never darling not ever. Wonderful writing and you are a magnificent soul, you will never run out of pages darling heart. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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