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Alicethruglass
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

0 posted 2002-04-09 06:17 PM

We Are Untitled

I see you standing there in the shadows
wanting to know me more,
the glass reflecting eyes' desire,
mine, the twinking of bittersweet memories.
I hear the echo of my heart
beating in the silence of this day,
soft rain descending, a needed washing
to cleanse the old, provide nourishment
for the blossoms of tomorrow.

We are untitled...You and I,
each searching for some unknown.
I impress easily, yours seizing me,
enlisting me into the arms of your hold.
You create in me a heat, that mysts the fore,
reestablishing our connection,
restoring my faith in love.

Your eyes reflect the truth, mine to believe.
When you tighten your resolve and turn away,
I understand and accept the cold-shoulder,
warming it with kiss-memories and time,
knowing that there is no finality
to my loving of you.
~A~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-04-09 07:09 PM

(sigh) This is powerfully emotional, sweet friend, I think we all too can relate to these feelings where we want someone regardless of what they are searching for otherwise, though I know deep down every two untitled souls will find they belong to each other happily always! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

2 posted 2002-04-09 07:16 PM

M darling girl oh this is sooooooo good. Truly outstanding, as always, you are such a fine poet. I love the way you’ve written this, it’s utterly superb, the flow is divine all the way through. This really is an excellent piece darling girl you have excelled yourself. The longing and the yearning reaches out from the page, you have written this sooooooo very well

Wonderful writing utterly wonderful

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

Morcastlin
Member

since 2002-01-14

Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA

3 posted 2002-04-09 07:17 PM

Alice, this is exceptional and truly something I can relate to! Well done!

Love,
Bonnie

"I want to Live! Life is a banquet and most poor bastards are starving to death!" -Auntie Mame

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