Open Poetry #20 |
A Magnolia Night |
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
We are silhouettes within satiny branches of a magnolia night scenting contours and curves of seduction Crossing the edge of touch like reefs of moonlight touching the body of the dark brushed by soft lashes of ecstasy You trace the cupid of ruby lips tracing with fingertips searching for sweet taste of rapture Your tender whispers swarms my soul like magnolia creamy white inviting velvet eyes and blossom of your kiss "If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare) [This message has been edited by Victoria (04-09-2002 05:44 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
brushed by soft lashes of ecstasy beautifully sensuous as always...I wish I had ruby lips...but I don't look good in red anymore. hugs M |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Ooo...magic and love is in the air. This drips with sensuality. Loved it, ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Victoria can imagine the burgandy blush of your smile as you whisper this delight |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are always so delightful to read! (kiss on cheek) May the perfume of loves flower always grace your life, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh Vic....you just get better with each one of these...thank you...love your picture that you paint so well.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoed |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Victoria - YOu could write beautiful poems like this to me forever, and forever would I read them... BC |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thanks M...im sure you would look good or maybe a ruby ring instead hugs thank you krista..thank you for peeking in hugs Ds..thank you for your sweet words..hugs thank you noah..love hearing from you sweet guy hugs barry..thank you..you are just too kind hugs bill..thank you ..that is very inspiring to hear..hugs |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sweet scented poem, love this. Now which is better, Magnolias, plumeria or gardenia? Sandra |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Your tender whispers swarms my soul like magnolia creamy white inviting velvet eyes and blossom of your kiss'' Fantastic!! ~V~ HUGSSS Lauren~ Step through the |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Sandra..if i had to pick i would say Gardenia ..i had a gardenia bush outside my bedroom window in Hawaii and the fragrance was devine..hugss thank you lauren..nice to hear from you..hope you are enjoying your time in MoD.hugs |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Wow, I'm glad I read this, it definately spellbound me I really don't know whatelse to say *whispers* I'm never good at this comment thingy Kristen |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Very sensual and lovely, Victoria. (((hugs))) Michael Stars will shine when I am gone |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Victoria! You sure can tell Spring is in the air when you look at the board today... Mmmm, this one is sensually yummy! Good stuff! Hugs. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Kristen..nice to hear from you..thank you for peeking in..hugs Michael..thank you dear one...hugsss Nancy..thank you so much..glad you think it is yummy ha..hugss |
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