Open Poetry #20 |
Stars don't hide away |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Stars don't hide away they wait for me to see On cloudy nights I search those lights and hope they search for me I let a love slip by into the spreading sea I was afloat a net, a boat but hoped you'd jump to me When the sky is clear a billion years have passed I look into a world that's new to see that love can last When the sky is grey it seems I have no past I'm rowing to a better view I see our love will last [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (05-01-2002 06:05 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Yo, Ho, Ho, me heartie tis a fine sea farin shanty, ye've penned here. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love it, the theme and rhyme is great! nice concept, I'm glad you got a good view |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hey star gazer! I too, think about time as I gaze at the twinkles, wondering if what I'm seeing still exists...I love the way you ponder in yer poetry. Hugs, waltie. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Row, row, row your boat |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
a nice romantic touch to this one, Walt |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
You've caused a bit of inspire with this one... thank you, Walt... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Really, really enjoyed this. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Walt darling boy this is wonderful, a fabulous sea shanty indeed, I love this excellent writing Love and warm stuff As always Slushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this Walt...James |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've come in leaps and bounds dearest Walt...good to read you again!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
haven't ben around want to say thank you all |
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