Open Poetry #20 |
I Need Some Mississippi |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I Need Some Mississippi Lord, I trust you with my life, I really, truly do but I’m ready for a bit of Mississippi instead of Colorado’s Snake. I’m ready for some sweet serenity, its leisurely flow instead of mighty rapids that toss me to and fro. I know You’re in control, You’re my raft to stay afloat but my mind and body’s tired of hanging on to the bits of the lasts’ ropes. I’ve given You the oars, and grabbed them back now and then. And now I can’t consider grabbing up the chore again. I need some peaceful waters, at least I think I do, but I know I truly must place all my faith in You. Yet as I wait You’re perfect solution to the needs in my life, please help me, Lord, find languid waters and harmony in You. ©April 30, 2002 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore. [This message has been edited by VAS (04-30-2002 11:31 AM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Amen and amen. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Stuck in some turbulence? I remember drifting lazily on a southern river. You're right, it's more relaxing than the rapids. But when you need an emotional pick-me-up, does the rush and energy of the Rockies river keep your head far above water? |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
I need some of this too, every day. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
WOW! THis is beutiful! Seems we are thinking the same thoughts today. I love the title! Liz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Peace floats on the internal river, no matter the where. I understand this turbulance ...and the great old Miss....sounds pretty good to me too. Wonderful metaphor! |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Beautiful! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
VAS...you HAD to know i would love this one...there is one thing in my blood...mississippi mud...helen |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Lots of Mississippi going down today, and that's a good thing. It reminded me of going through rapids. Really enjoyed. |
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