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Wind Blow
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Wind Blow |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
I send my thoughts so far aloft to have you find them tender and soft Put your face to the questing wind as you smile and see the when There is no need to say outloud nor any need to have a crowd The eyes do tell what you want to know unspoken words to give the glow In the return you give to me on soft wind from eternity The now of when and of then tells me of the sweet begin On we swirl in sweet refrain from here to there in instant gain Let the winds carry us where for it matters not, if in the there Take my hand, take my soul take whatever is your goal For there or then or in the now what was there was what we allow |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, may love whisk away on clouds to what tomorrow brings and have you sailing always on silver linings with your sweetheart hand in hand! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Logan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AhGentleGuardian~ I see you also lay sticks~ 'Take my hand, take my soul take whatever is your goal For there or then or in the now what was there was what we allow' Fully understanding the tenderness of you~ *Hugs* ~*LittleGoose*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan "In the return you give to me on soft wind from eternity The now of when and of then tells me of the sweet begin" Sometimes time is only rhyme and what is real is the feel of forever that has been in the now and ever again Hugs! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Watch the mists as they do part for in the glen is where we start upon a pathway for only two above the green, beneath the blue carry courage, comfort, values, heart as the wind carries all dreams start talk in quiet as you lay the stick as the mists fold in so thick they are for us but a blanket of thought when future's past is a glimpse of caught |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
On we swirl in sweet refrain from here to there in instant gain Let the winds carry us where for it matters not, if in the there Take my hand, take my soul take whatever is your goal For there or then or in the now what was there was what we allow =================================== Well this is a cadenced kiss breeze of quiet comfort. Beautiful heart rhymes and whispered wisdom Logan...tenderly spoken. ... and I don't know why ... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
For there or then or in the now what was there was what we allow ohhhhh how pretty this poem is... such a beautiful bouquet of expression you have penned... thank you4this treat of a read... smiles2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I am stunned and quieted by the intense beauty of this, Logan. May I rest a while by your hogan, for inspiration? |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Thank you, Noah, for your kind words and read. I always appreciate you being here..gentle smile Ahh, Silly Goose, guardian that you are, you always have the feel..very gentle smile Very gentle smile to you, Martie, and thank you for the verse. Kindness in itself that is so appreciated Ahh, Sissie, I am overwhelmed by more verse spurred on by my few thoughts. Thank you so much with a very gentle smile Sweet, JM, you know I always love having your read and comments. Thank you for being you..very gentle smile Interloper, thank you for the read. I feel very honored when you so do and your nice comment..gentle smile Ahh, thank you, Coco, for your kind words and for the read, nice to have you here..very gentle smile Gentle smile to you, Midnitesun. You always have a place at the fire. I am happy that my words reached out then..Thank you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Take my hand, take my soul take whatever is your goal For there or then or in the now what was there was what we allow ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ As always Logan you have penned such a breathtaking yet oh so gentle read. I'm pleased I did not miss this as I have had company the past while and we have popped in and out of PiP just momentarily. Your writing always touches and inspires me. This one is wonderful dear gentle man. ~Soft sighs and a warm hug~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Take my hand, take my soul take whatever is your goal For there or then or in the now what was there was what we allow" you made me cry like this  this is so damn touching....a keeper, to say the least |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
"Take my hand, take my soul take whatever is your goal For there or then or in the now what was there was what we allow" this was one of the softest most tender writes thats ever graced my eyes...so soft and yet it contained so much power! beautiful reflections of your heart logan thank you ever so much for sharing. take care. amy "you can't stop |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Logan, Very much enjoyed this tender work of poetry. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Missing your presence, dear firekeeper. This write, as all you ever left us with, is worth more than one reading. |
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