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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-04-29 04:01 PM



“KEEP ON GROOVING”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Night breezes blow quietly,
caressing faces…
Dancing together close,
warmth of your embraces…

Moon shining in the sky,
light comes down touching…
Bathing you in moonbeams,
your eyes to see, abducting…

Reggae what they play,
with Caribbean flavor…
Enticing each other, loving,
into this encounter…

This woman in red dress,
in moonlight moving…
Hearts keeping in step,
to keep on grooving…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-04-29 04:14 PM


Bill, this reminds me of a night I went out here at a local beach bar...was wearing a red dress, the dance floor was sand, and the Jamacian band was playing on the stage! WoW! I had forgotten about that night until I read this poem! Thanks for the reminder  

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (04-29-2002 05:03 PM).]

Larry C
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2 posted 2002-04-29 04:34 PM


Bill,
You just keep on... Fun write.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

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3 posted 2002-04-29 04:40 PM


"Reggae what they play,
with Caribbean flavor…
Enticing each other, loving,
into this encounter…"




(smiles) Wow, I love the Caribbean twist you gave this poem, sweet friend, I dream of visiting the islands so very much, I could envision the tropical setting here! (big hugggsssss) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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