Open Poetry #20 |
Shoes Themes |
paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Pointy toed half boots Zipper on the side The kind all the Beatles wore Boy they were fab Platforms On three inch thick soles She is teen queen of the hop Tugs at her mini dress White bucks Black woolen blazer Obscure crest on the pocket The shoes make the man Baby heels Sort of wobbly Her first pair of grown up shoes A little make up Penny Loafers Kept a dime in mine The last word in teen aged style Great dancing shoes Saddle shoes Perky white and black Bobby socks and a poodle skirt Rock and roll angel Gym shoes Smelly and frayed Yor mom wants to throw them out She does'nt understand paladin [This message has been edited by paladin (04-28-2002 11:48 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Your wonderful laughter and inspiration is endless, sweet friend, the end especially gave me the laughs, you know how to win the readers attention, now those toe shoes you can keep! LOL! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
I really really likes this!!! I have to go check out more of these... I know this isn't the first one you did.... remember seeing another someplace. Made me smile... and laugh... especially "tugs at her mini dress" I can picture it!!!! Love, Light and Peace, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love it Bob! Saddle shoes is now favourite! You sure brought back a lot of memories. Well done! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I"m glad I went back to catch this one, very neat |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Great write..I have a shoe fetish and can mark the times perfectly as you have with each pair.. They do speak don't they. Sincerely, Reg |
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