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paladin
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0 posted 2002-04-28 11:28 PM


Pointy toed half boots

Zipper on the side
The kind all the Beatles wore
Boy they were fab


Platforms

On three inch thick soles
She is teen queen of the hop
Tugs at her mini dress


White bucks

Black woolen blazer
Obscure crest on the pocket
The shoes make the man


Baby heels

Sort of wobbly
Her first pair of grown up shoes
A little make up


Penny Loafers

Kept a dime in mine
The last word in teen aged style
Great dancing shoes


Saddle shoes

Perky white and black
Bobby socks and a poodle skirt
Rock and roll angel


Gym shoes

Smelly and frayed
Yor mom wants to throw them out
She does'nt understand


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[This message has been edited by paladin (04-28-2002 11:48 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-28 11:38 PM




(giggles in delight) Your wonderful laughter and inspiration is endless, sweet friend, the end especially gave me the laughs, you know how to win the readers attention, now those toe shoes you can keep! LOL! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-29 02:25 AM


I really really likes this!!!

I have to go check out more of these... I know this isn't the first one you did.... remember seeing another someplace.

Made me smile... and laugh... especially "tugs at her mini dress" I can picture it!!!!

Love, Light and Peace,

Sherry

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

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3 posted 2002-04-29 08:38 AM


Love it Bob!
Saddle shoes is now favourite!
You sure brought back a lot of memories.
Well done!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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4 posted 2002-04-30 05:43 AM


I"m glad I went back to catch this one, very neat
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5 posted 2002-04-30 07:53 AM


Great write..I have a shoe fetish and can mark the times perfectly as you have with each pair.. They do speak don't they.

Sincerely,
Reg

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