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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-04-28 03:52 PM

Thirst

am I but
a puff of smoke
completely out
of fire
or am I the
strong blue flame
that your soul
will never tire
I blush across
your mind
in hues of
crimson red
the very thought
of another day
is the food
that inspiration fed
it is the first
wave of coolness
when a sip
has been disbursed
solitary sustaining
drink of life
to quench
a parched thirst

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (04-28-2002 03:58 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-04-28 04:05 PM

(smiles) Oh Helen, this is sooooo beautifully touching, sweet friend, I wish for this inspiration and something special to always thirst your parched throat and bring you great joy and comfort always! (kiss on cheek) Your words are always so gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2002-04-30 05:36 AM

wow! I love the way this read off my lips, yes I read it aloud, and it was so beautiful!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2002-04-30 06:00 AM

ms slick
you make the word
have a real meaning
left my mouth dry too

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

4 posted 2002-04-30 09:34 AM

Helen,
I was parched and didn't even know it until now! Great write.

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-04-30 07:02 PM

Nice.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-04-30 08:02 PM

Helen, very well written, nicely done.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

7 posted 2002-04-30 08:06 PM

I doubt that you could ever be a puff of smoke, miss. This is very smooth writing

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