Open Poetry #20 |
Hey You! ( a poem of delight ) |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Hey You! Ow! Ow! Ow! You’re blinding me You great big ball of gas! But I gotta tell ya, I love it, I love it, I love it! You crystal up the dew drops, you sparkle up the lawn. You brighten up the hours and lighten up the dawn. You call flora and fauna to a state of readiness in glory and honor they beam an eye caress. It’s as if the world of nature has nothing more to do than stand at rapt attention and pay honor just to you. And I will praise your Creator for loveliness that abounds the way the day unfolds and the happiness I’ve found. ©April 28, 2002 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"It’s as if the world of nature has nothing more to do than stand at rapt attention and pay honor just to you." (smiles) This is the most perfect Sunday blessing poem, sweet friend, may we all be blessed by the many gifts He offers us and honor all that Mother Nature gives and respect her! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wow! This just pops! Very well done. ThisDiamond |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Virginia, I thought you lived in Oregon?! Forgive me...I know better. And this is indeed a poem that bursts on the page. I just couldn't keep my smart mouth shut. It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! [This message has been edited by Larry C (04-29-2002 02:18 AM).] |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
A poem of delight or a poem of THE light... either way it is a deLIGHT to read such a wonderful poem. My sol is elated!!! Love, LIGHT, and Peace, Sherry Gardner Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There is a lot to be thankful for if we just take the time to look around us. Most delightful this was. Very!!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Imagine how bleak our world would be if we did not have that bright light waking us each day...and showing us all the beauty that abounds around us... Nicely done Virginia... |
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