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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-04-27 12:34 PM



I can only but offer a shoulder
to lift you when you are down
I can only send you a smile
to help wash away your frown.

I will paint the gray skies blue
when dark clouds loom overhead
share with you the colors of the rainbow
with brilliant yellows, green, and red.

I will listen when you weep
and make your tears depart
I will be there for you
in friendship and in heart....


{wishing that rainbow to come
and greet you very soon Sandra...
hugs to you..}


Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)



[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (04-27-2002 12:38 PM).]

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Aimster
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1 posted 2002-04-27 12:56 PM


GS~

this is such a beautiful friendship
poem, and your heart shines beautifully
in it...you and cat are very lucky to
have one another, keep on writing your
sweet words my friend!
take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-04-27 01:48 PM




(big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, Sandra is too a wonderful friend to me just as nyou are anjd my heart goes out to her always and I wish for all the love and happiness she desires to fill her heart! (kiss on cheek) I know she will always be blessed to have such a wonderful friend like you, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is a beautifully compassionate piece! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2002-04-27 02:37 PM


Hi, thank you for this. I am feeling better, so don't worry.(all the love from my friends here helps so much) It just comes and goes, I guess the poem I wrote was about that, how it shows up when you think you have it under control, and often goes just as suddenly. Anyway, you are a sweetheart.
Sandra

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4 posted 2002-04-27 06:37 PM


Donna darling girl, this as always is excellent writing. You have such a caring soul, it shines in this piece which sends a wave of beautiful peace through a soul troubled with pain. Wonderful writing darling girl utterly wonderful


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Larry C
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5 posted 2002-04-27 06:48 PM


Donna,
I knew you make an excellent friend. Perfect timing for Cat and so well done. Sandra bless you for your courage and honesty! Cheers to you both. Woohoo!!

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

Martie
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6 posted 2002-04-27 06:59 PM


Donna

A beautiful giving spirit...yes gentle.  So very apparent in this friendship showing poem.

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2002-04-27 08:54 PM


Sandra, hugs...
thanks~ to all.  I was just trying to spread a smile today, because I know how depression feels...have been there way to much myself.....so...therefore...
here's a smile....

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)


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